OMG! Haha! You posted on here! :D That's awesome. I'm totally faving this. ^_^ ♥

Love the story and the series.

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i am loving it.its very close to my heart.harry potter rockx.

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I'm not sure how old this story is, nor how many comments it has. I am sure that you've had a lot of comments like this, but here goes anyway...

I love it. The writing itself is very good. Almost Rowling standard :) The style keeps up with her style and it feels like I'm reading the last few chapters of her own book.

The plot and chain of events here is exactly what should have been in the ending of the book. You provide the closure that I'm sure many readers were missing.

The story is interesting and keeps the reader's attention. I found myself laughing and crying at the strongest parts. Very well done.

I really look forward to reading more of your work. Please keep writing, in whatever genre you pick.

Best,
Leah

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I LOVE your stories!

You have GOT to publish your novel AND all your Harry Potter Fanfiction! Just keep on going and submitting all you can.

:)
P. S. You're the only 10/10 i've given so far :)

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I have just discovered these stories but I will be reading all three, even if one is more than 100 chapters. You've got a fellow writer hooked!

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A little too soppy for my liking. could have been a little shorter.

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excellent, thanks, i look forward to reading the next installment

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This is really amazing! This is a great Chapter 37! I absolutely loved it and I'm looking forward to reading your other stories. You really have great potential and I hope you put up more stories because your absolutely amazing! I really cried while reading Lily's letter. Loved it and great job with this

-Kristel

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Beautiful! Amazing! I can't compliment you enough! This chapter is really touching and so is the first part. You really know how make the readers understand your story. I think it's good that you made Fred 'go with a bang'. It's really sad that Harry couldn't spend time with Teddy and you really made me cry at the funerals. And I also like the part when they were talking and Ron said that if Harry hadn't met them then Ginny would have died. All in all, this is a great chapter and I can't wait to start reading Part III.

-Kristel

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Wow...Just wow. This is amazing! There were so many things unsaid and just so many things that should have been written after the battle and before the epilogue. Things about how they started to move on. I really agree with you and you are an amazing writter! The story is very detailed and very full of emotion! It's just...wow

-Kristel

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I did not like this. It is too sad and unteaching, in contrast to J.K. Also I do not think people like whining that much.

Author's Response: Well, I think Harry would be entitled to whine a bit after all he went through. If you read parts 2 and 3, the whole point is that he is gettign past how he feels.

Thanks,

Lewis

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Thanks for writing Chapter 37, it was missing.

I cant wait to read the ones that follow.

River

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I really appreciate your chapter 37, it's the best I've read so far. I would cherish your work even further, but I'm no good with expressing my feelings (and I'm no native english speaker, too).

On the counterpart I think I noticed a small mistake:
" ... 'Tanya works here. Annie spends a lot of time here too.' FRED lowered his voice. 'Tanya's husband, Annie's father, was a Muggle-born. ... "
It should be George, not Fred, since Fred ist dead and cannot lower his voice, shouldn't it?

Nevertheless, you really did a great job, my greatest thanks for this chapter and your other stories.

CaulDrohn

Author's Response: Oops, I'll fix that. I know I had a few name swap mistakes like that, but I thought I caught them all.

I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks,

Lewis

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This is great so far. Keep up the good work.

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You have the magiic of JKR and have made me cry and laugh at the same time

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Love that you had Harry see Fawkes. Cann't wait to read part II & III

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What a very moving chapter! awesome awesome.. can't really say much, Perfect!!

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Verynice way to tie things up after the battle. You could definitely go further with it.

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A great read indeed, nuff said.

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That was wonderful. I really enjoyed it. Thank you

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Very moving. I even had a few tears well up...

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I really loved this story. The best post-hogwarts war ending ever. Great job. Can't wait to get started on the other stories!

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This is awesome! You really have a knack for writing. I am looking forward to reading the next story!!

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This story is a MASTERPIECE. Your story telling is almost as good as JK Rowling.

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Beautifully written. I just loved it. Your short story managed to convey each and every single emotion felt by Harry. Not many authors can do that. Great job!
10/10

~ Now i'm gonna start on your next story: Harry Potter and the Legend of the Twelve. Hope its just as good as i heard it is. :) ~

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