Wow that was so interesting. I never imagined Severus being chased by Voldemort in the afterlife. You did a great job with this and I honestly think you should do more. To bad your out of ideas. Anyways great job this was very well done. Report Review
omg! just like that? bring my *ahem* bring Sev back!! Lilly never knew lol that is priceless. and having Sev go back to the bastard after he had him killed lol i hope Sev advada's him just for the hell of it *bad joke* anyway this was awesome and i hope that the plot bunny bites you soon!!! hugs!!! Report Review
It was really good and sad but sooo confusing. At first I thought they were alll dead and they were talking in the after life, but then I thought that everyone but Snape was dead. So confused... please help me.Author's Response: This story takes place a few days after The Battle at Hogwarts in Deathly Hallows. Severus, Tonks, and Remus have been dead for a few days. Remus and Tonks ended up near Lily and James' home in the afterlife. Severus was days away from them.They're all dead. Snape dies before he gives Harry his memory in DH.
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~Elphaba Report Review
Really so nice,please write a 2. chapter too :) Report Review
i love this. plz write more!!! Report Review
This is a really good beginning; please continue! I really want to read more, I really love Severus/Lily. Great job with the first chapter!
Diandra Report Review
OMG that gave me shivers...another chapter PLEASE!!! Report Review
It was good, but I think it would have been more interesting to read an encounter of lily and Snape alone in which they might have discussed matters. Moreover I get the impression that Lily was aware of how Snape felt from the Deathly Hallows. Anyhow it was still good.Author's Response: In the end, they are kinda alone, but thanks for the advice. I may write another chapter for this story. I'm sure I really didn't explain this well, but there's a lake outside the house where Lily, James, Sirius, Remus, Tonks, and Dumbledore are living. It's kinda like a pensive, but instead of memories, they can see what's happening in the world of the living.
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~Elphaba13 Report Review
really really good. Report Review
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