Reading Reviews for Marlena Valentine
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Review #1, by Amelia Marlena Valentine

6th December 2007:
well, you said you had other stories, so I'm going around reading all of them, next on my list is the one with the banner that has scenes from becoming jane, and I really like the look of the per-pal having the crush on harry, HAHA! great idea,
btw, though I DO write, I'm not sure if I could write HP but I could give it a go I suppose.

Author's Response: Thank for reviewing my stories! I ALWAYS appreciate them sooo much!

I haven't seen becoming jane yet, but it looked REALLY good!

Thanks for the review!

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Review #2, by Mrs Becky Lupin Marlena Valentine

3rd November 2007:
Hmm.I reckon that was a pretty good stab at a first-time song-fic. What you need to look for when (if) you write another one is making sure you get a song with better lyrics. Don't get me wrong, this is a wonderful song, but the lyric range isn't very vast. Maybe try a song whose lyrics tell a story next time, just until you get better at it. I may seem hipocritical (I haven't tried a song-fic yet) but I think you can help others better than helping yourself. Right?

Beautiful job!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin

Author's Response: Thank you for such a great review!
Marlena Valentine is a song very close to my heart. It is a "nonsense" song, where the lyrics are just sung out cacophoneously. (still wondering if that's a word...)

Thanks again!

I loved your stories! from

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Review #3, by Moni Jane Marlena Valentine

24th October 2007:
aw it was really cute. :) very descriptive too. good job! may good writings continue to you. ~Moni Jane

Author's Response: Thanks Moni Jane! It's my first song fic, so I hoped it was good! Thanks bunches!

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Review #4, by durmastrang_fluer Marlena Valentine

6th October 2007:
WOW!! thats really good songfic!! I've only found 3 songfics i've liked and i gots pretty high standards!! Congratz on ur weonderful story!!

oh yes, if you could.would you plz check out my story: Strangers Get Involved?? Thanks a bunch if you could=)

love ya,

Author's Response: Yay!!! My work here is done... =)))))

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Review #5, by monkeygirl100 Marlena Valentine

4th October 2007:
Pretty Good
Monkey Girl :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is my first song fic and I was kind of nervous about it! Thanks again for my first review for this story!

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