Reading Reviews for The Darkness Within
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by d An Change in all She knows

23rd March 2008:
it seriously needs more action but i guess you could get a 5/10

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Review #2, by ce-ce An Change in all She knows

22nd November 2007:
really good. please have 2 chapter soon!

Author's Response: I will be updating soon hopefully.

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Review #3, by Mrs SiriusBlack An Change in all She knows

29th September 2007:
Okay...I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but you seriously need to get a beta or take some English classes. Second, normal people don't curse at their parents, and even though it is a fiction story, it still has to be believable!!

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Review #4, by xXblacksakuraXx An Change in all She knows

28th September 2007:
Well . . .

Erm . . .

I read it. It really could use a Beta. On the positive side, though, Delia Malkiavian Wall is quite an original name.

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Review #5, by iloveharry1234 An Change in all She knows

27th September 2007:
i love it please post next chapter soon!

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Review #6, by madison_rankin An Change in all She knows

27th September 2007:
ok so im confused what the hell is going on it all so mixed up

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