4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by theblacksisters Chapter 1: meeting potter.

27th September 2013:
Good so far, please update. I look forward to more. Just please don't excessively use the f word.

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Review #2, by Deadly rose Chapter 1: meeting potter.

17th October 2007:
i think its interesting...like zara's mean and tough attitude. if anyone was voldermont's child i think they'll be arrogant and cold to protect themselves...
continue this pls, its good

Author's Response: thank you :D
yay people actually like our story! lol

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Review #3, by Mystery Lover Chapter 1: meeting potter.

12th October 2007:
really good! I love the way Zara is so arrogant ! Well done!!

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Review #4, by J and J Production Chapter 1: meeting potter.

3rd October 2007:
I really like it.. weird though... please keep writing

Author's Response: i guess thats a good review lol
ill try and get rid of the weirdness in the next chapter lol

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