That was so amazing! If my account was working I'd add it to my favorites! Oh, well, hopefully it will work soon. anyway good job! *Claps and a cookie* -charly

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Aww poor severus! But he's a stupid git and he never deserved her. Loved the story!
xoxo
Lilz

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Wait...what was Snape's plan? What was he going to do to James? Or is that not important because he realized it didn't make a difference now that he truly had lost Lily forever?

Author's Response: Snape was going to torture James, but as you said, it didn't matter anymore b/c he realized he'd lost Lily forever

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Aww so cute and sad, I loved it!

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Good. Def one fo the better fan fics I have ever read. You understood the characters and how they would react to things. Sometimes people would twist the characters personality's to fit their story but you didnt.

Though i can't lie i was a little confused as to what snape was planning on doing before he realized lily was there, also cofused as to whether or not lily and james were asleep or awake.

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Okay then email me at tony@microtech.com.au and tell me who you would like on the banner, if you want any quotes/writing and if you have a colour preference.

Thanks
Laura aka Lil lily71

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RowenaSlytherin (under bff penname):

That was great and as much I'm trying to love Severus for basically saving Harry in DH I really loved this and the Lily/James pairing, sincew LilyJ is my favorite pairing! I felt sad for Sev though...at least James and Lily were happy. The plot and actual writing her were fantastical!

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I loved it it was sad. Do you still want a banner?

Author's Response: absolutely!!

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Wow. I definetly enjoyed this story. It was a differnt take on this subject and I thought you did it very well. Kudos to you! Keep up the good work and write more stories like this.

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Poor Snape...

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Hi!
Loved your story. Hope you continiu soon!!

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