{reviewid: 2212843, reviewer: 'ginnyrox895'}
7th September 2009:
Aww...that's really sweet. This story was very well-written. Maybe you could try writing a longer Harry/Hermione story.
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{reviewid: 1998548, reviewer: 'joyce_potter'}
30th November 2008:
hehehe so funny hermione was afraid of her feelings.
Author's Response: haha thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1959167, reviewer: 'cuteybearkel'}
9th October 2008:
Ernie is so mean to Hermione. But he helped H/HR happen, so he's cool. A good story. 9/10
Author's Response: thanks! im so glad that you like the story!
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{reviewid: 1923630, reviewer: 'harryhermsmooche'}
15th May 2008:
it really describes my nickname and im obsessed with Harry/Herms situations so its a 10/10!
Author's Response: thanks!!! im so glad u like the story!
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{reviewid: 1678385, reviewer: 'AussieAnatomy627'}
21st October 2007:
AWW that was cute! Great job!
Author's Response: im glad u liked it! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1671422, reviewer: 'HPlover_12'}
16th October 2007:
awww.i loved it,it was sweet
Author's Response: im glad u liked the story! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1667032, reviewer: 'dennisud'}
13th October 2007:
Wow a great short story and with my favorite pairings!
dennisud
Author's Response: thanks! im glad u liked the story! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1658584, reviewer: 'Olympia'}
7th October 2007:
THAT WAS AWSOME
Author's Response: im glad u liked it! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1658454, reviewer: 'mbstargirl123'}
6th October 2007:
Nice story! I love when students play games like spin the bottle or truth and dare.
I did notice, however, that you had a few spelling mistakes, like "mew hats", instead of "me whats". And I did think that you could draw out a bit the whole "I love you-thing". It seems to me like these feeling might take some time to develop, not just, I-kissed-you-and-now-I-love-you.
Good luck with your writing!
Author's Response: thanks for the advice! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1653267, reviewer: 'vicki.s'}
3rd October 2007:
lovely story, couple of typo's that could do with fixing though :)
Author's Response: thanks, i think im going to go through it and make some changes! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1652690, reviewer: 'flute_babe89'}
2nd October 2007:
that is totally sweet...loved it...
Author's Response: im glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1652149, reviewer: 'fanatic1'}
2nd October 2007:
I love the story... always a fan of H/Hr stories... great one shot... put out some more if you get any good ideas like this...
Author's Response: thanks for the compliments! thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1650905, reviewer: 'dreamy_days'}
30th September 2007:
Dude no offence but u cant spell Fine lol dont worry thats the only word i picked up but it was good very good in fact
Keep Writing
Dreamy_Days
Author's Response: lol, thanks! i know i have spelling issues! lol, jk. anyways thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1649713, reviewer: 'painfullygone'}
30th September 2007:
AWESOME!
Sometimes i cant figure out why people put a story as there favorite, but never leave a review.
lolz. good job, and this is going on my favorites! XD
Author's Response: i know, honestly! lol, jk. thanks for reviewing and adding it to your favorites!
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