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Review #1, by The Author Of This Awful Story

2nd April 2009:

To any readers - Wow. I was such an awful writer then. I used to go on this site all the time and then I forgot about it. Well, I went on here now and realized I used to have a fic, so I did some searching and found this one. I read through part of it, and it made me want to throw up. I was 11 when I wrote this part of it. Needless to say, it'll never be finished.

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Review #2, by Marina Cartwright

Explanations and the visitor

9th October 2007:

Great Job. I would explain more about setting because you changed them to quickly. otherwise- fabulos job! Where is Sirius?

100/10

He should have put a door to a fully stocked Quitich Pitch. LOL

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Review #3, by Marina Cartwright

The Veil

9th October 2007:

I love this story you are doing a great job! I felt so much emotion just pouring of this! -Something you do not usually see!

100/10

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Review #4, by pottyandweezlbe89

Explanations and the visitor

8th October 2007:

hey there i loved this chapy more than the second...will we find out the reactions of harry and sirius' 'death'? i hope so...cant wait for the next chapy...10/10

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Review #5, by ChoS_sista_gurl

The Veil

7th October 2007:

hmm...i wonder where this will lead...

i love "beyond the veil" stories. i've been writing one too, from Sirius's point of view. check it out if you're interested! it's called Siriusly.

keep writing!

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Review #6, by athos_aramis

The Veil

27th September 2007:

interesting scenario. I'll be waiting for the next

Author's Response: thx. I know it's really unrealistic and AU but when I have time I'll do another, I've sorta planned it out

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