To any readers - Wow. I was such an awful writer then. I used to go on this site all the time and then I forgot about it. Well, I went on here now and realized I used to have a fic, so I did some searching and found this one. I read through part of it, and it made me want to throw up. I was 11 when I wrote this part of it. Needless to say, it'll never be finished. Report Review
Great Job. I would explain more about setting because you changed them to quickly. otherwise- fabulos job! Where is Sirius?
He should have put a door to a fully stocked Quitich Pitch. LOL Report Review
I love this story you are doing a great job! I felt so much emotion just pouring of this! -Something you do not usually see!
100/10 Report Review
hey there i loved this chapy more than the second...will we find out the reactions of harry and sirius' 'death'? i hope so...cant wait for the next chapy...10/10 Report Review
hmm...i wonder where this will lead...
i love "beyond the veil" stories. i've been writing one too, from Sirius's point of view. check it out if you're interested! it's called Siriusly.
keep writing! Report Review
interesting scenario. I'll be waiting for the nextAuthor's Response: thx. I know it's really unrealistic and AU but when I have time I'll do another, I've sorta planned it out Report Review
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