AW this story was awesome! I loved how all the characters grew up and how there was a mystery around Bliss. I read this in two days when I was supposed to be doing work. Ooops :)
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Hello there. You probably won't see this as its 2013. Anyway, I really like the whole mystery around Bliss. Arghhh James is really getting on my nerves!!! Good job :) Report Review
Okay! I know I only use songs for your non-novels, but this one has a song that just has to be used! I will put in more of an actual review after.
"I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling don't be afraid I have loved you
For a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more
Time stands still
Beauty in all she is
I will be brave
I will not let anything take away
What's standing in front of me
Every hour has come to this" -Christina Perri
Okay. I. Loved. It!! At first, i thought Bliss' problem was kindof...not a big deal. After a few chapters though i realized how being told to be perfect can be horrible!
Wow, that was deep for me.
Anyways, I will be reading more, giving you more song lyrics as reviews for your one-shots and Short Story Collections, and giving real reviews for everything else. Report Review
CUTEST STORY EVER! Adorable! Couldn't stop reading! Report Review
Awe I loved it so much. So cute and a perfect fluff for me to read! Keep up the fantastic work! Report Review
I love Bliss. No, I am not a lesbian and I will never be one. It's just that she acts so perfect outside, but on the inside, she's like a normal girl who just probably wants to live normally. I'm glad that she finally told James. Maybe then he'll stop being so cruel to her. Oh, and btw, I'm so sorry that someone plagerized your story! As a kid, you learn many times not to, and yet, sometimes you still don't learn. I absolutly abhor plagerizing. It's like cheating on an exam. It would not only prove you as a fake, but it also proves you untrustworthy. Anyway, instead of just writing on and on and on, I have better things to do. Like reading the next chapter...:) Report Review
I loved this story so much. I loved bliss's character. Thanks for a great read. And yaay, I'm your 501th reviewer!Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed it :) I do hope that you read the sequel too...it's been a while since I've posted for it, but I'm taking it off hiatus and I've started writing again.
Thanks for being my 501st reviewer! Report Review
I love this story!! Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad to hear it! :) Report Review
So, I LOVE this story.
But may I please point out that Lily is 14, not 7.
She'd be a freshman in high school if she were a muggle.
Just sayin'.Author's Response: Well, I just graduated high school, where, for the last three months I've been helping out with my school's all-freshman muscial. Lol, if you'd been there, you would see that this chapter was a relatively accurate portrayal of some 14 year olds. I hate to say it, but some of them are nuts lol.
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I ABSOLUTELY ADORE the ending!!! Keep up the GREAT writing!!!Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that you've enjoyed this story. I do have a sequel that is (slowly, but surely) being updated now. I hope you check it out too and let me know what you think!
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E.E.EEEP.P.P! So sweet. 1000/10Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! So glad you liked it!
I would love a 1000/10...that would be so awesome lol. Report Review
No!!! James is supposed to tell her that he loves her! But now Bliss' mother is gonna get her back! But James is gonna beast it up on there, going all, "You're bad for her and I love her and you're a horrible mother!" And then Bliss is gonna go, "Oh James! I love you too!" And then they're gonna forget about her mother and live happily eve after! Yay! :)Author's Response: Lol, I like that ending. You should be the one writing this! :) To be honest, that's pretty much the way it goes too. But you already know that!
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Report Review
Aw, Jamsie is in love!!! :)Author's Response: Hehe, yes he is! And it's fantastic that he's finally figured that out. Took him long enough, didn't it? Report Review
James is an ass. And he's in love. Amd he needs to be nice to Bliss! What's the deal with her anyway? Did her mum die? Or did she abuse Bliss or something?Author's Response: Lol, yes, James is a jerk. And yes, he's in love. But you'll just have to wait and see about Bliss...I couldn't ruin it for you!
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Albus, more like stupid wankerAuthor's Response: Arielle was single.
And its not as though James was interested in her anymore. I thought it relatively obvious that James liked Bliss... Report Review
Loved the story :) You got some real talent as a author, you managed to keep me engaged through-out the whole story. Haven't seen you reply too any reviews in a while, but if you do see this, I'm looking forward to reading some more of your fanfics.
Oh, and give us a Bliss sequal woman. :P lolAuthor's Response: Why thank you :) I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it. And I'm quite flattered you think so highly of me. Honestly, I'm blushing right now :)
I have been a little slow on reviews lately. I've had such a hard time writing that reviews have been put on the back burner right now. But I read this one and knew I had to respond.
Let me know what you think of my other stories. And you've convinced me to seriously consider a sequel for this one. I don't know what to do with it, but I'm excited to brainstorm now!
Thank you so much again :) Report Review
I feel like punching James in the face... really really hard. he is so spoiled and self-centered.Author's Response: I get that feeling a lot. And does completley deserve it lol.
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great ending. very simple. I loved the character development in this story!
-quidditch77Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I didn't want this to be some kind of complicated story. Mostly because I'm not very good at writing them lol.
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this is absolutely adorable!! sorry for the delay. i just got back to this story and im very glad i did. I enjoyed it so much :)
-quidditch77Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! Don't worry about the delay. I'm sorry that its taken me so long to reply to this review!
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Aw poor Bliss, she has to deal with that She-Beast. :(
Anyway i am going to get back to reading, really great story so far!Author's Response: Ugh, I know. It seems that a lot of my stories have mean mothers...I didn't realize it lol. I must have some subconscious issue with it.
Thank you so much for reviewing and reading! Report Review
I was so shocked to hear about the playgerism of your work, u must have been really angry. But little avail you are an amazing writer and Bliss, was absolutly perfect, so well written with a great storyline, you can really see your skill and love of writing.Continue writing be the best you can be, dont let the world miss out because you really are an amazing author.Author's Response: I know, I can't begin to explain how utterly heartbroken I was about it. I almost stopped writing altogether because of it.
But alas, I couldn't keep away from it. I'm so glad to hear that you liked "Bliss" so much. I really did enjoy writing it :)
Thank you so much, you have no idea how much I love those kind of compliments. I hope you continue to read my works! Report Review
this is such a cute story! thanks for writing it =)Author's Response: Hehe, thank you for reading it!
I love nice reviews :)
I hope you read more of my stories! Report Review
In the beginning I didn't like James much, he was to much of an ass. And I almost stopped reading, but I'm glad I cept reading. Because in the end I really liked the story. :)Author's Response: Lol, I think everyone hated James at the beginning, I know I did. The story was about his growing up, his transformation into adulthood rather than his love of Bliss. I know people like dwelling on the romantic part more, but I like to think about his maturity.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Who knows, maybe there'll be a sequel in the future! Report Review
the jig is up time to face the truthAuthor's Response: Yup yup.
Its about time too :)
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Woah...wow...It's..it's...it's really...really...REALLY.REALLY AWESOME!
Now where to start? (rhetorical question =3)
So...I hate and also love James Sirius Potter ;) I hate him because he is:
Stupid but smart?
Pathetic-excuses kinda boy ;P
I love him cause:
He is funny
He sounds cute ;)
He grows up
He is blah blah blah...ANYWAY!
At first, even though I loved your writing and how the first chapter sounded...It also sounded like a bit of a ripp-off of twilight!!! XD lmfao..
Mmm, I read twilight...but I'm not a big fan. Anyway..side-tracked easily ;)
Yup, at first. Because of the golden eyes XD .
I reckon you made quite an achievement, I write myself but not fanfics :D I can't be trusted to continue. Anyway...(I say that alot, don't I? o.0)
Really...if you think about... there ARE lots of people in the world...BUT you're one person...with one story...AND LOTS HAVE READ XD
That's awesome :D (Yes, I am very very weird *tick*)
Hehehe, now for the REAL review...
I love Bliss. At first, I didn't like how she was captured in her little cage and couldn't get out... But then Albus and Lily helped her. And when James was like that for 6 years to her...I would've screamed my lungs off. It'd be unbearable for me. =[ She held it...but she cracked. Like all would do after an amount of time.
-I love how you did that. The emotions...the reality of it.
-I love how James finally grown up...
BUT I didn't like Albus and Areille together..it didn't seem right; after James dating her for ages...=/ BROTHER would DO that? I'd be pissed. I'm that immature. But yeah...how he stayed calm was...'
I was wondering about the..."I love you." in the middle...he said it and she didn't gasp or anything, kinda weird to me. BUT anyway. :P
(*TICK* - Anyway)
I love how she cut her hair.
How did the mother find out where she was? ...Were they partying too loud ;) lol
I love the end. Really, really do. The bit before 'the end.'
XD GREAT thinking...
One million and one out of ten.
I wish I could say more..but ^^ I'm totally lazzy...
- Sarah or Miss Hippydoggg
P.S. Hehehe long review. LONGEST REVIEW LOVE ME!
Oooh and sorry about my typo's and my krazyyy love for idiotic long EEE's and stuff :P (!)Author's Response: First of all, I am SO INCREDIBLY SORRY for taking almost a year to respond to your review. As you can probably tell, my updating skills suck, so reviews have been lacking. I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed my story so much :) I really do love that your review is miles long!
Ah James, the center of my absolute affection and hatred. In the beginning, you were supposed to find him annoying and immature. The whole point of the story was not about him falling in love with Bliss, but how he matured and grew up.
Lol, you know, I never realized until right now that Bliss is kind of Twilight-ish. You see, I started this story before I read Twilight (bc I was against it forever, but then gave in), so I never put two and two together. Lol, I kind of feel like an idiot because I'm not totally in love with Twilight. Thanks for pointing that out though
Its good that you like Bliss. She's supposed to be likeable and innocent. Which is why it makes it so ridiculous that James hates her. The general theme of the whole story is to grow. And for Bliss, that means growing away from her mother's control.
I totally understand why you think its weird that Al and Arielle got together. But to be fair, James didn't really like Arielle that way. It was more of a friendship, and though they were attracted to each other, they just weren't it. And as high school/teenagerdom is, everybody dates everybody else. It wasn't supposed to be 'Albus stole Arielle!'. It just kind of happened. To be fair, it didn't last either.
Lol, I feel like the scenario of girl getting emotional/gasping over the 'I love you' was overplayed. And we both know this couple isn't conventional at all.
I'm so glad that you loved my story so much, read, reviewed, rated and such. I'm so sorry it took me an eternity to answer back! I love you! Lol. Report Review
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