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Review #1, by Isabel Black Proluge: Malmorfius

13th February 2010:
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Review #2, by Joanne K Proluge: Malmorfius

20th September 2007:
Great imagery in this chapter, your descriptions are fantastic. There were a few spelling mistakes, so make sure you proofread or get someone els to proofread for you. I felt the ending to this chapter wasn't quite as strong as the beginning. Maybe you were just rushing to finish it, I don't know. On the whole I really enjoyed this chapter though and I really loved your characterisation of Malmorfius Riddle.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will keep writing.

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