:D So sweet. . . I like it. I like it a lot. I must go read some of your other works now! The Key Report Review
Why would Black be laughing like he just pulled the world's greatest prank?" i liked your foreshadowing :) and i liked the rest of the story! just one little thing (i hope you don't mind that i'm saying this) but its ceiling instead of cieling. just nitpicking though :) 10/10 oh yeah and i like your banner a whole big bunch Report Review
Why does Lily act so weirdly?? Report Review
hahah that was awsome go lily sweep him off his feet! Report Review
How cute. That was a good idea on Sirius's part i have to admit. That is very cool. Good job that was a good story. Report Review
Cute! Extremely cute!!! I Loved it! It gets 10/10! Report Review
Nice story; very fluffy. Only thing I would say is to keep your tenses. It goes from being "James says in..." to "Lily rolled her eyes.." and it does work. But otherwise, nice job! Report Review
Sweet! I loved it.Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Aww, that was sweet =) Go Sirius!! Love xX mOoNdAnCe XxAuthor's Response: hahha thanks Report Review
short and sweet, i liked it :)Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
i love it its so sweet, please maka a sequel or somethingAuthor's Response: thanx! Report Review
aw i love james and lily x_x_x_Author's Response: thanx for reviewing! Report Review
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