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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by therainfalls Introduction

6th October 2007:
ohh I love it!
It's brilliant.

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Review #2, by blueandbronze Introduction

25th September 2007:
I think this has real potential. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks :]

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Review #3, by Girldetective85 Introduction

24th September 2007:
Nice job! This beginning sounds great, it sets up everything nicely. The only thing I would be careful about is to make Regulus as easy to sympathize with as Sirius, who felt a little more 3D in this chapter. I like the portrayal of the Black family very much, especially how the parents treat their two sons and how they treat each other. Good work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, it's only an introduction I shouldn't have went OTT. :]

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