First of all i love e e e the song! :)
second i think the banner is absolutely fab!
and third, I LOVED THIS!
It was really amazing, you should be proud! : D :D
i was wondering perhaps if you could read my new one- nursery rhymes. I'd love your opinion!Author's Response: I love the song too. It actually came on my ipod a little while ago and I hadn't heard it for a while and squeed a bit... I love the banner too, it was really brilliantly done. I can check out that fic, I'll do it sometime today, so look out for a review. Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
wow, this was really great. I don't really like that song, however I think it went nicely with this fic. the figurative and emotional language you used were AMAZING and you should be very proud of your excellent work here. great job!
9/10Author's Response: I know not everyone likes that song (it is fairly depressing and may not be your music taste) but I'm glad you thought it went well with this! Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Report Review
Hello there! This is LittleBookworm from the forums and I'm here to leave the promised review! I'd like to apologieze for the delay, though. My life has been pretty hectic lately and I just didn't have the time to sit down, read and review your stories. Everything's back to normal now, though.
Back to the story: It's simply amazing and heartbreaking at the same time. I nearly cried and my heart went out to Remus. You could really feel his pain through this story and the description+characterization is wonderful. I never actually read a story that involves Remus's feelings after finding out that Lily, James and Peter are dead. You managed to create a bond between the reader and the character, making the reader understand what the character is feeling, making the reader relate to the character in more ways than one. Well done! :)
-LittleBookwormAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing! It's fine about the delay, no need to apologize. I read a fic about this time period that inspired me to write this, it's always hard to find stories about this particular time period. I'm glad you liked the description and characterization and you were able to relate to the character. Thanks for reading! Report Review
ok it waz really sad. ure right listening 2 it helps Author's Response: Yeah, listening to it does make the effect better. Thanks for reading! Report Review
AW!!! Tears are forming in my eyes!!! How DARE you?! This is brilliant!!! Was there a kleenex warning on this? If not, I strongly advise you to put one on!!! THIS IS BRILLIANT!!! Poor Remus, I try hard not to think about this time period in his life. You portrayed the character very well! And the emotions came across EXCEEDINGLY well!!! *sobs* What an outstanding brilliance!!! GREAT JOB!!! For that I give you a katrillion (is that a number?) out of ten! *wails* GREAT JOB!!!Author's Response: Nope, there was no tissue warning of any sort... Poor Remus, he needs a kleenex more than anyone in this. I always wanted to know what his life was during that time, but you're right about it being hard to read. And katrillion is a new number, it's your property! Thanks for reading! Report Review
that is so sad! i love this story!!Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it! Report Review
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