this story is very funny. keep writing more please.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks for the praise. There was originally a second chapter but i deleted it because it wasn't well written and i couldn't find a way to express Lucia's thoughts without overdoing it on the confessions theme. But i'm still racking my brains for ideas and if one comes up i'll be sure to continue with Lucia because she is one of my preferred made-up characters. Report Review
wow i really like this pairing. usually people make stupid characters for the next generation, but you've done good.Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great comments, and i'm glad you like this pairing because it's one of my favourites.
Also, thanks for leaving yet another review. Report Review
this is wicked sweet! i can't wait to read the next chapter! i like the format you have it in, makes it seem like a diary, but maybe you could, i dunno, spruce it up a tad? like, visually, not plotline...leave that alone!
kbavAuthor's Response: I can't believe i'm replying to yet another of your reviews, i'm so grateful you took the time to comment. Also, i see what you mean but it needing a bit more flesh, but i can't think what to add without making it seem a bit irrelevant... but if i think of something it'll come right on.
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Oh my god, the cuteness value is choking me!
Loving it muchly
tis exceptionally brilliant!
You should be very proud *shakes hands quickly and applauds*Author's Response: Thanks so much for your amazing comments, i am rather proud of this one, and i'm glad you found it cute but maybe someone ought to get ready with the Heimlich maneuver... Report Review
s'great! write a sequel! write a whole BOOK! (kidding :D)Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, but i don't think i'll be making it into a novel just yet... :p Report Review
wow very good! bit nuts with the lawnmower but bravo!Author's Response: Thanks for the comment but no way am i getting rid of the lawnmower... Report Review
Hahaha I love this.
Ok please go back to this and write more about it..!
It's amazing she's so so funny. I think you need more information about the families and a bit more background information about their relationship,
More pleaseAuthor's Response: I did write a sequel for this one, but it wasn't very good so i deleted it... however your review has just given me inspiration for a new one, so thanks because i was searching for a way to continue. Report Review
Um... it was funny.Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the positive feedback, i'm glad you found it funny. Report Review
love the story it was great
10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and positive comment, i'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. Report Review
Good writting. Keep it up. I enjoyed it.Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and i really appreciate the positive feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
aw cuteAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it. Report Review
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