this story is so funny! I love the way you write in Fleur's accent, it really gives a lot to the story :)
Please, Please continue it! it is a very funny read and I really like it. I want to read more, though I guess you could end it here if you wanted...
The Knicker scenario was so funny! 'specially when Bill was actually joking! hehehe I thought he was for real too
I really like it!! 10/10
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love the story - amazing!!!
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now, THAT was good!
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oh my gosh!!! i didnt actually realise that he was joiking either!!!
hilarious - love it!!!
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Please Update Soon! This is one of my favourite stories! x Report Review
This is soo funny..
This is good..
I love Bill and Fleur..
They're perfect togather! Report Review
loving the story,cannot wait for the next chapter! Report Review
Again,this story just keeps getting better and better!!! Report Review
I thought this story was ingenius,loved the end of this chapter -absolutely hilarious!!! Report Review
This is brilliant! My first venture into fleur/bill and delighted! Report Review
-cococola131 Report Review
good french words.
luved it, but update! Report Review
Keep writing, my gosh, you've got an interesting idea. Normally I ream Dramoine or Sirius/oc but I was hooked by ur summary and then the story was just...so orignal!! Nice! Report Review
fantastic chap! pls update soon! im putting this into my favs! =D Report Review
Ooh!!! I LOVE it! Really, really cool. And funny.
Just an idea... she could go and visit Cedric's parents... it would be a really nice touch, because they just disappeared from everywhere else.. she got along well with Cedric, so she could go and check on his parents, just as something a friend would do, you know? Report Review
This story is sooo cool! Report Review
Once again, an amazing piece of writing. Is this done, cause i sure hope not. Report Review
Oh, this is really good, and Bill acts just like I imagine him to, and Fleur seems canon too. It's funny and really cute, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Report Review
This is great! I love the interaction between the two of them! It really fits. Bill is the perfect mix Weasley taits and himself, and Fluer is...well, Fluer. I really liked the part where she wanted to be mad at him, but the caring side of her took over.
Great job! I hope to see more wonderful chapters in the future!!! Report Review
I just adore this story. I love how you make Fleur...well, different. She's still beautiful, but like in later books in HP, she also displays a personality, and i believe that she is a strong, stubborn woman, just like you have shown. And Bill's this ordinary, cute guy, but he's a Weasley and so that makes him fantastic, even more so the way you write him. Seriously, "That a no?" He asked lightly, after several more moments of silence. "Or would I have reason to hope you might've been stunned into silence by the subtlty of my advances?" that just cracked me up.
There is definite chemistry between them, and it doesn't feel forced at all. It comes off with such great ease. I hope you keep going with this as i'm thoroughly enjoying it so far. Also, besides the punctuation errors in dialogue that I mentioned earlier, your writing style is so lovely. I love the comments in the narrative that come off wonderfuly funny and add a cool sound to the story. Keep up the great work. I'm now a fan! *favorites*
~Liz Report Review
This is simply amazing. i loved the ending when she banged the little box against his head and Beell called her an angry frenchwoman. This story simply makes me very happy and giggly. :D Report Review
I absolutely adored this. i mean, what a great, light-hearted narrative and absolutely fantastic portrayal of the two characters, especially Fleur. I am completely awed (and in hysterics) from her Non!. And Bill was hilarious, but nothing compared to that last part. I daresay i laughed out very loudly, and i don't do that often, even if the story's really funny.
Your writing is very nice and also descriptive, but when you use dialogue, there should be a comma after parts of speech, followed by he/she said. Like,
"Never again," she said angrily. Or something like that, if you get my drift.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this and want to read more straight away. What an amazing idea. i'm a big fan of Bill/Fleur and this grabbed my attention straight away. Especially the fact that you don't portray Fleur like a little sissy. her want for independence is really endearing. Still, the best moment was the last and I'll have it in my head for the rest of the day. Report Review
Oh! This is brilliant. Witty, perfectly paced and amusingly believable. It's rare I genuinely like Fleur, but you've really done her wonders. She's still Fleur, too. And I like her. Yes. I realise I've sort of already established that :]
So well done :]
-Rose Report Review
This story makes me crack up every time I read it :) I absolutely love it and hope you right the next chapter as soon as you can! Report Review
this story is sooo cute! i love it, fleur is great, bill is great, its all great. keep it up! Report Review
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