"she had sympathy for the future mother of the little Padfoots"
I thought this story was funny, but I was slightly disgusted by the sheer obsessiveness that Sirius has with girls... being a girl.
Lol it made laugh and I can imagining James and Sirius being just like that!
:D 10/10Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
This was good, at some points it seemed like the plot was made to fit the song but the song fit Sirius almost perfectly. A few sentences were a little muddled but all in all it was well written and an interesting one shot.Author's Response: lol i think the plot was made to fit the song! i was just listening to old school beastie boys one day and penned it down real quick. it could probably do with some revising but it was just something fun to do. thanks! Report Review
ha, this story was funny. I hang out with a lot of guys and this reminded me of hanging out with my boys. So kudos to you for writing the boys very well. this was entertaining.Author's Response: thank you! i just felt like the song fit them well. Report Review
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