Dude, this is so Albus!

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I really like it! I'm tired of fics that are so dramatic and full of people yelling, crying, making up and then hating each other in the time-span of about a week! I love how carefree this is going. I also like James, I like that he's a nutty, drama queen who squeals like a little girl. I also like Teagan, although her outbursts about not being like her mother are slightly annoying. I would love if it could just be carefree, yeah? No big insecurities and trouble at home, you get my drift? ANyways, you're a great writer and your fanfic is really a joy to read! Keep it coming!

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2013 and still coming back here to check for updates ;-)

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I adore this story! Every chapter is a gem! I can't wait for more!

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I love this story. James' inner thoughts always make me laugh. His feminine tendencies are probably the funniest, just because he tries to cover it up by acting so manly and rugged. Haha. I think he's a real sweetheart though and I hope Tegan doesn't overreact to his plot with her mother. Keep writing! :)

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HAHAHAHA OMG i am literally crying cuz this chapters so funny!! i love that james is the main character in this book and he has a weird crush on tegan instead of the other way around. its funny how he's writing in his diary, er "imagination journal" about their wedding and james is such an oddball instead of a cocky player! hes kinda feminine, but in a good way!! keep up the awesome story!!!

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Just wanted to say that I'm brand new here so excuse me if I don't really know how to write a review, anyway.

I really, really love your story. I love the plot, how the characters are not so stereotypical and how they interact. Please don't tell me you've given up on the story!!!

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PLEASE UPDATE. I hope tht tegan doesn't kill James :(

and I was just wondering... why does James act like a poof

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Okay I'll admit I wasn't to hot on the idea of reading a story from James' perspective but I love this! He's hilarious and absolutely how I imagined him to be. I love the little quirks about him (i.e. saying cap'n) and his eccentricity!

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I. Cannot. Freaking. Wait.

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I. Cannot. Freaking. Wait.

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A little criticism: this doesn't sound at all how 16 year old boys would be talking...they sound more like girls.

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Is it really necessary to keep having the characters point out that Micah is Jewish? I'm just on chapter 2 and it's mentioned enough that it almost seems racist.

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i can't be bothered to read this story anyomre...
it lost it's spark :(
~The Little One~

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I'm new to this story but We Gryffies is absoutely addictive and I can see why it won a Dobby. It's brill and just wish Tegan and James would get back together again! Snorky gets on my nerves and you inspired me to start my own HP story.

Laura

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Hang on, is this the end? It's been great all the way through, I was totally hooked, but this is a crap ending! Please write more!

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OMG. This is freaken awesome! I always use the word Frick! I absolutely love this already!

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:) loving this story! can't wait to find out how it all ends. will Tegan ever forgive James? and how will she react upon finding out her parents are getting divorced?

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This was amazingly hilarious!! Eleni really is crazy.

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I think you switched J.S (james) and J.D in this chaper cuz i think its from james point of view and you put J.D for when someone talkes to him? It might just b me nit understanding. Could you clarify? And btw great story!

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OH MY GOSH! YOU DIDN'T MAKE THE TERRIBLE AWFUL EVIL AMOUNT/NUMBER MISTAKE (sorry... I have a really bad grammer-nazish pet peeve about that... this is the sane part of me speaking) anyway... I AM SO PROUD OF YOUR GRAMMER SKILLS because a lot of stuff i have seen so far on this site has, sadly made the amount/number or less/fewer grammer mistake and that made me angry, but now you make me very happy. Now you are in my favorite authors!!!

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I really do love this story. But, (I'm going to be an honest prick here) sometimes your magnificent writing conflicts with strange story line or bad plot progression. Luckily these strange patches are few and far between, so I as a reader have nothing to worry about.
There are really too too too many good aspect of your story and writing for me to possibly cover, but I would like to say that I had to stuff my fist in my mouth to keep from waking up my family at 12:00 am from my laughter! Your writing flows effortlessly and is pleasing for me to read. When I reached the end of this chapter I said 'Awww, is that it?' because I enjoyed your spectacular story so much!
Please write more stories!!

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Sorry! But this chapter was really confusing with so many PoV changes. And since I was just expecting James for this chapter, having J.D start out was hard to follow.
Still love the story!! I will give full review at last chapter.

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haha this chpater is soo funny! i love James' Imagination Jornal and the way he writes in it, he's so fuuny the way he plans out his whole life ;) p.s. i love the idea of a kumquat eating dog!

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this story is sooo funny! i love it :) you narrate the story very well and james is a really likeable chracter. well done :)
i can't wait to read more
10/10

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