if only you had made it a little more longer!!! ugh! either way, it's good though (: thumbs up! Report Review
Ahh! You made him die?! Report Review
You suck! Hermione should have come in time to save him by shouting Expelliarmus! And then they live happily ever after! >:( I DEMAND A REWRITE! Report Review
awww that was lovely, i actually have tears in my eyes :') please write some more soon. Report Review
omg. i was hoping they'd get back together... awww!Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you liked my story! ~Katie Report Review
wow, that was so good. i love stories about george and fred, even though i could have done with out the whole hermione deal, cuz i think she belongs with ron, but that is besides the point. i still loved it and will probably read it over and over!!! do u know any other good fred or george fics??? i am trying to find some really good ones!!! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the high rating! Um, I don't read many Fred and George fics, so I don't have any to suggest. If you want to find some I suggest simply searching for fics with Fred or George Weasley as the main character. I love that seach engine! Thanks again for reviewing, and I'm glad you like my fic. Especially since the ship isn't your favourite. =) ~Katie Report Review
wow, that was a little depressing, not going to lie, but i guess u were right, the ending wouldn't have worked out any other way. great story, i luv george/fred fics.Author's Response: In an odd way, I'm glad you found it depressing. That was the feeling I was trying to portray, and by your review, I know I pulled it off, at least to some degree. I am sorry I depressed you though. Thanks for your review! Report Review
pretty good. 8/10 :DAuthor's Response: Well, that's not bad! Thank you for reviewing! ~Katie Report Review
I love, this story, it's so sad and so well written.Author's Response: Yeah, it was really sad. I'm really glad you like it, and thank you for reviewing! ~Katie Report Review
DEFINITELY DO A SEQUEL!!! LUUUVED IT! ;)Author's Response: Wow, thank you, I'm glad you liked it! ~Katie Report Review
hey katie!! this is the first story of yours that ive got around to reading... and it was great!!! im ghonna read another one...! ~ashleyAuthor's Response: Hey, Ash! Yay, you liked this one! That's great, thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Really well written, a rather sad ending but good none the less!Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review! I'm glad you like it, and it was rather sad, but it didn't work any other way. *tear* ~Katie Report Review
omygoodness.. that was terribly sad :'( I think maybe a sequel would be good.. with a different ending to this one.. lol it was so sad! but u wrote it good :) I liked it.. other than the end.. 9/10.Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing! As I said in my A/N, the sequel might take a while, if I decide to do one at all. Sorry. I will try and get one up though, because I really like this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! =)Hermionesclas(= Report Review
Egads! Way to make a really powerful, unpredictable way to end it all. Brilliant job! As much as I dislike Hermione/OtherWeasley romances, this story was nicely different. Keep it up.--ToRa*Author's Response: Glad you liked it, especially because you don't usually read Hermione/OtherWeasley stories! Yay! Thanks for reviewing ~Hermionesclass Report Review
i wanted to cry! losing a twin would be awful. i dont think i could have the courage to write a story like you did. very depressing, but still goodAuthor's Response: Wow. Thank you so much! I can only imagine what it must feel like to lose someone so close to you. I'm glad you liked it, and sorry for making you cry ;) ~Hermionesclass Report Review
No!Author's Response: Lol, yes. Unfortunately. Thanks for your review! ~Hermionesclass Report Review
Yes, it is sad, but it's written really well and by really well I mean REALLY WELL!!! You had the perfect amount of suspense. You got the readers (I showed this to a few of my friends =] ) attention and kept it until the very end, when we all realized, oh bugger...he died...damn...Anyways, great story. Looking forward to the sequel...Author's Response: Wow! I'm glad you liked it so much as to show it to your friends! Thank you for reviewing! xo Report Review
This was definitely an interesting concept. I didn't think about a suicidal George, though that would make perfect sense. Hermione seemed a little out of character in what she did, but you made the situation seem realistic!!Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Hmm, you think Hermione's OOC? How to improve that........... Glad you liked it! Report Review
*sniff* beautiful and sad story!! You really captured George's sadness, as well as the feelings and thoughts that came rushing when he kissed Hermione. The death-part was...well, depressing.. but then: death is never joyful in stories! 10/10! LIKED IT A LOT!!!Author's Response: Thx. I really tried to capture emotions in this story. I hated the death part, but it worked for the story, and that's how my brainstorm came: the summary and the final line (which I changed) "George Weasley lay dead on the floor" Report Review
OMG! That was the saddest and most beautiful piece of writing I've read in a long time! I don't think thats how you die in the Avada kedavra though. But great job! 10/10Author's Response: I know, with the Avada Kedavra it's kind of immediate, but he was dead, he could just kind of see still...does that make any sense? Thanks very much!! Report Review
oh how horrible. but a great piece of writting. there could be no other ending. marvolus (no I can't spell thats why I leave the writting to great authors like you)Author's Response: Thank you :) glad you enjoyed reading it, even if it didn't have a happy ending Report Review
ahhh no hes dead? thats soo SAD!! tear tearr but its a good story!!!Author's Response: I know *joins ronswife tearing*I didn't want to but it couldn't end any other way Report Review
what? its okay i guessAuthor's Response: I'm not asking anyone to like it, I posted it cuz inspiration struck me and I figured there would be a couple people willing to read it. It's completely up to you whether or not you like it. Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
Thats sad.Author's Response: I know. *tear* I didn't want to kill George, but it just worked for the story, and I couldn't picture it any other way Report Review
Aargh No! It was supposed to be happy, ohwell it was beautiful anyway. I've made you a banner if you're interested email me at taylor_1313@hotmail.comAuthor's Response: Oooh!! Thank you!! I'm emailing right now!! Report Review
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