That was very well-written. I especially like the end. I had a feeling something was going to happen, something in the way you wrote it was a bit tense which set the mood perfectly. I think it's a good prologue and a very intriguing start to the story.Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Unfortunately, I had to abandon this story. I had it all planned out, but it just wouldn't work the way I wanted it to. Sorry! :( Report Review
your banner is soo unbelievably cool, gaspard ulliel is soo hot.the story is cool too.Author's Response: Thank you for your review.
The banner was made by Redemption @ TDA, and I really love it. She's very talented at making banners. Report Review
Hmmm...this looks like it's going to get very interesting. Nice job, the writing is very good. Not much I can pick on, so you'll have to settle for general praise.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm always critical when it comes to my writing, but it's nice to hear that you like it. Report Review
oooh, intriguing first chapter Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I'm happy you find it intriguing, that's exactly what I wanted. Report Review
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