Was Ginny with Harry? Hmmm. I absolutely loath cheating and I completely sympathise with Dean. She cheated with him (on numerous occasions, it seems), in their spot, on their first anniversary, and still says she loves him?
I felt that that was a heart-breaking ending, with Dean leaving Ginny the ring. It just showed her how much she had given up, how much she had lost. It was a great ending, fitting perfectly with the story.
As well, I like the comparison you made at the beginning of the story, between the Ginny Dean saw before he knew that she had cheated and the Ginny he saw now.
I thought you wrote a very realistic reaction to the knowledge that your loved one cheated on you and I'm glad that you didn't have it so that he forgave her- at least, not instantly.
A great job! Report Review
Aw, this was so cute! Normally im not a big fan of Ginny/Dean but this almost broke my heart! 10/10 :) xxx Report Review
Poor Dean! This was so sad. I always hate the concept of cheating because there's always someone who gets really hurt - and people being hurt is simply terrible!
You nailed his despair in this, even though it was very short, which I liked, because it kept it intense.
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Wow, Ginny, way to break a heart. Gosh. Report Review
Aww that was sad.
But really good, and well written. Report Review
that was the bestest and sadest dean/ginny fanfic ever! I loved it! Youve got to write more! GOT TO! I"M BEGGING YOU!
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It was grantacular! Report Review
Nicely written. A lovely picture "a million, tiny, irreparable pieces."
Keep writing. Report Review
how sadd... nice concept. [: keep on writing, you're doing fabulous. nice one-shot. Report Review
Oh it was so sad!!! I wanted to know who Ginny cheated on him with but oh well I will use my imagination. It was so sad but I loved every bit of it! Report Review
Oh my goodness, that was so sad! I loved it though, I did. There were close to none grammar/spelling-errors, though I must say the one thing that bugged me a little bit was that each new paragraph didn't start... how do you say it? You know, didn't start at the edge of the, eh, paper. You know what I mean. If you're gonna do that, the paragraphs need to be longer, so that it doesn't look so spaced up.
But back to the story, I thought Ginny was in character, and Dean was brilliantly written. I never thought him to be so bold and tough, but I guess he could/can be. As I said, brilliantly written. I liked the plot as well, just wondering who he is! Harry? :o But then I don't think she would've gone back to Dean, would she??...:/
Oh well, great job!! Report Review
Well thats sad. I wanted to know what her reason was but its still good. I like this story a lot. I feel so bad for both Dean and Ginny. Good job. Report Review
oh my god. that was so sad!):
i'm crying. so so so sad.
but you're writing is amazing.
keep up the good work.
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Really good story! Absolutely loved it!!! Report Review
wow... ur an excellent writer! please keep writing! read my story against everything pleez!
XOXO Report Review
did she cheat on him with Harry? that's so sad. good job and good choice of words!Author's Response: nah, t'was a man by the name of draco malfoy.
thank you for your day-brightening & encouraging words! Report Review
Oh no! I wouldn't have seen Dean and one to cry, but it was very nicely written.Author's Response: thank you! yeah, dean is kind of oc in this one. Report Review
Oh, god. I'm crying. Just... beautiful job. Just... wow. Going in my favourites.
--RP/KateAuthor's Response: yayy! i made you cry.
oh dear, that sounds simply terrible. i meant that, *flustered*, i'm glad you really felt the emotion.
thank you for this lovely review that says it all! Report Review
was this "cheating" with Harry? or is this AU? Report Review
Oh wow. That was really good. Just Wow.
~HermionesclassAuthor's Response: wow, eh? is that all you can say?
thanks for the encouraging review! :P Report Review
ohmygosh.thats SO sad!! but it was well-written. and here's an idea: why dont u channel all this creative-writing-energy into a certain TRUTH OR DARE story!!!
COME ON!! Report Review
This was really good. I think it could have done with a little more description between all the dialogue, but other than that I loved it. I could feel Deans sadness, and the ring at the end made water well up in my eyes. Was it Harry that she was kissing?
Once again, great job. =DAuthor's Response: actually it was draco. i do so love those draco/ginnys.
"made water well up in my eyes," eh? i'm glad. i mean, not that i take pleasure in your sadness, but making the reader feel the sadness was the goal.
thank you! Report Review
Oh, this was so sad. I loved it, honestly, I did. Beautifully written.Author's Response: I like to go for sad in stories, except for my main one, teenage games know no boundaries, that's all humor! Report Review
Interesting point of view... I actually never thought of that. I mean, I was only happy that Ginny can finally be with Harry, but..
Yeah, good story ;)Author's Response: Yup, most people never think about Dean.
thanks for reviewing! Report Review
ohh poor dean!! this is really sweet you've done dean justice!
Author's Response: oh, thank you! you never really see any dean stories so i thought i'd give him a shot. Report Review
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