lovely story, but LAME climax. okay, i get it that Sarah was mental, but she was trying to help him? eh.
otherwise, very nicely gone story

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very nice . . . I like the plot twist!

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really great short story. Well done.

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Aww, so we're not going to see any more of the Dursleys? That's too bad. I was actually getting happy of you presenting the Dursleys (well, Petunia and Dudley, at least) as concerned relatives of Harry. Oh well, there are more pressing matters to attend to, I guess. Hope to see the next soon! ;-)

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Finally! Ron came back to his senses! Cheers for that! But I cant believe he made Hermione the one to propose! Funny, though. And gosh! The Dursleys! What would happen next?!

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Well, it's not really uneventful considering this certain Sarah Gray's introduced. Haha, I can imagine the wizard photo Harry running from his frame and then biographers had to resort to muggle ones instead to keep him in place! That was funny! And Ron! The prat! He should just get over his jealousy mode and just snog Hermione senseless! Good reference of Harry feeling like that when he entered Hogwarts. I like it. Sorry if I didn't review in your previous chapters! Got so eager to read the next ones! lol Hope you update soon! ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The whole thing is already written but it takes a while to get it posted... Hope you keep enjoying it.

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