That was amazing! Wow please extend to when they start going out!!!

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I had to smile at this. It was so endearing. I don't usually fav one shots since they don't get updated, but your one of the special few who I do fav. So 10/10.

Author's Response: Thank you. I have to say, that is the one story I actually like out of my writings. :)

Summer xx

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hehe really cute! typical- overexcited James!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Summer x

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Oh my god this is amazing!

Author's Response: Um... I'm glad you think so. Thanks.

Xx- Summer -xX

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Aww James was her hero ^^
A really cute story.
Keep writing :)

Author's Response: thank you. i'll try.

Xx- Summer -xX

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o lucky james...i enjoyed your story ... it was great

Author's Response: Thank you again.

Xx- Summer -xX

ps. Nice name

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Aw...that was sweet and cute. I liked it a bunch. The plot was kind of perdictable, but in away not. Still good job. 10/10
-gin

Author's Response: wow. 10/10.

can i pleez say i reeeeeeely like you now. hehe.

i know what you mean.

Xx- Summer -xX

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oh, nice.

not much to say but good job. you have really good writing.

Author's Response: um.. thanks.

Xx- Summer -xX

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Awww that is beautiful and really really really cute :D
Good job. Two thumbs up.

IloveNeville.

Author's Response: I know. I have a soft side for romantic stories with a bit of action in it.

Xx- Summer -xX

neille rocks awsomely

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Very short, but really good too. I like it. I love how excited James is, how cute! And I love the way Lily realized she loved him too! This is such a cute story!!! 10/10 ^_^ ( now turn the edges of the mouth up a little and there's what my face looked like when I read this . . . really it did!)

~ Lemon Drop 616 =]

Author's Response: OMG.

i seriously love you now. You ompliment me. ^_^ yay.

Xx- Summer -xX

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awww, that was such a cute story! :D I love it! :)

Author's Response: a-thank-a-you

xx- Summer -xx

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So so so cute! I LOVED IT! just a bit of constructive critisism: 1) spelling; some of the words are missing letters 2) It was just a bit rushed, : ) I absolutely loved the whole thing though! Bloody brilliant idea! 10/10

Author's Response: omg

thanks. I know about the spelling and stuff but i was kind of rushed so i had an alibi. ha.

xx- Summer -xx

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It is a little short. The first paragraph could have been longer. Maybe explaining how Lily felt about the noises, what the noises sounded like, et cetera. And what is a hudgr? It was very nice how you described the stag (should I say James) and Lily. You also could have described going up to her dorm more. The last paragraph was really nice though. Good work.

Author's Response: um..... thank you?

hudgr is my way of proving i dont have spell chack at the minute and what happens when i type really fast. its huge but usually spell it with a d for some reason.

sooooo thank you for the comment...
i think

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That was soo cute! It's adorable! I can just picture James as a stag galloping around the place in his excitement. Such a cute, funny image.

Author's Response: thank you for your compliment and i totally agree with you. the image is just sooooooo cute

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Kl! one thing although i understood it well it was hard to read coz of the spelling mistakes!
other than that it rocks!:P :D

Author's Response: sorry...

spelling is my weakness

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James the stag running around in glee is super cute, but it was even cuter when he was normal James and was ecstatic about her kissing his nose. So so so so so cute!

Author's Response: lol
i know i just thought about it and thought people might like and know i have proven my point

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omg this oneshot is just like an idea that i had, im glad you wrote it thou!!
great job!

Author's Response: Thank you

isn't it strange that i wrote a story that you had thought of just after i wrote it.

xx binki333333 xx

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the story isn't better than the summary.

Author's Response: is that a good thing or a bad thing????????????????

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