Reading Reviews for Potion Accident Universe
  
9 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Horcruxhuntersdotcom Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

19th November 2007:
the only real problem with your writing is that you need more punctuation to slow it down and break up your sentences.

 Report Review

Review #2, by Horcruxhuntersdotcom Chapter 1-Meet the boys

19th November 2007:
Just one problem,

[“Good morning son” this was from a tall messy haired black man]

u might want to change the order there mate.


 Report Review

Review #3, by midnightwolf2192 Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

12th October 2007:
please update soon.

this is a really good story.

10/10

 Report Review

Review #4, by Draco_is_my_Boi Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

26th September 2007:
i like!

 Report Review

Review #5, by Lily_Potter_Evens Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

26th September 2007:
lol liked that a lot.

 Report Review

Review #6, by Lily_Potter_Evens Chapter 1-Meet the boys

26th September 2007:
lol cool. liked what lily did, and a cute twist having ron and ginny being twins. neat, post more.

Author's Response: Thank You so much for taking the time to review my story. The thing is it will take quite some more time to post it as my computer crashed

 Report Review

Review #7, by JULISTEAMER Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

25th September 2007:
I LOVE IT ,PLEASE UPDATE SOON ,I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THEY BECOME FRIENDS , YOU ROCK



Author's Response: I was blushing after I read your comment.Thank You. I will do my best to update as soon as possible


 Report Review

Review #8, by ihs Chapter 1-Meet the boys

17th September 2007:
i LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review

 Report Review

Review #9, by Mrs_Riddle Chapter 1-Meet the boys

14th September 2007:
It was good so far, a few mistakes here and there, but theyre easily over looked.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you find my story nice.But if possible could you please tell me what those mistakes are? I would really appreciate it as it would help me to improve my writing.Thank you

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login