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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Horcruxhuntersdotcom Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

19th November 2007:
the only real problem with your writing is that you need more punctuation to slow it down and break up your sentences.

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Review #2, by Horcruxhuntersdotcom Chapter 1-Meet the boys

19th November 2007:
Just one problem,

[“Good morning son” this was from a tall messy haired black man]

u might want to change the order there mate.


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Review #3, by midnightwolf2192 Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

12th October 2007:
please update soon.

this is a really good story.

10/10

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Review #4, by Draco_is_my_Boi Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

26th September 2007:
i like!

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Review #5, by JULISTEAMER Chapter 2-Meet The Girls

25th September 2007:
I LOVE IT ,PLEASE UPDATE SOON ,I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THEY BECOME FRIENDS , YOU ROCK



Author's Response: I was blushing after I read your comment.Thank You. I will do my best to update as soon as possible


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Review #6, by ihs Chapter 1-Meet the boys

17th September 2007:
i LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review

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Review #7, by Mrs_Riddle Chapter 1-Meet the boys

14th September 2007:
It was good so far, a few mistakes here and there, but theyre easily over looked.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you find my story nice.But if possible could you please tell me what those mistakes are? I would really appreciate it as it would help me to improve my writing.Thank you

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