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Review #1, by lifter57 Chapter Three: Wondering

31st October 2009:
You have an interesting tale going here - how about finishig it?

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Review #2, by gglol16 Prologue

30th November 2008:
omg, that was so0o sad! it reminds me of a sad e-mail i got a few years ago. woww good job though

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Review #3, by Judy Chapter Three: Wondering

22nd March 2008:
Great fic! You've got me hooked - poor Hermione, and Harry. I really hope they get help soon, somehow. You've shown the pain of abuse through a child's eyes very well - simple, but emotive.

LOL at the little memory flashback though - honestly, playing exploding snap with a baby? *shakes head* So Marauderish :)

Author's Response: Thank u! The last part of ur review cracked me up... and it's true... lol... only a Marauder would play exploding snap with a baby... and don't worry... Harry and Hermione will get help... soon... I'm still writing the next chapter (stupid writer's block) and b/c I'm working on my new story (Potter Secrets), school, and dance, things are getting pretty hecktic, but hopefully the next chapter will be out soon. *breathes deeply* hehe... long response... lol thank u for reviewing!!!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #4, by HermionePotter101 Prologue

10th January 2008:
poor 'Mione...i feel sorry for her...

Author's Response: I feel srry 4 her 2... thanx 4 reviewing

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #5, by ilurvedannyr Chapter Three: Wondering

2nd January 2008:
whoa...AWESOME CHAPTER! WHOOT! i luv this, 123/10 update soon!

~ildr

P.S. thnx again for reviewing my Twilight/HP fic!

Author's Response: haha! I'm so glad ur enjoying it! and thanks for the big rating... lol. It was no problem about the twilight fic... it was ah-mazing... lol.

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #6, by Deerose90 Chapter Three: Wondering

2nd January 2008:
Great job I've been wating for an update.

Author's Response: ^_^ Thanx!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #7, by hermione Chapter Three: Wondering

2nd January 2008:
ohh cute I really like it. cool update

Author's Response: I'm glad u like it! I'll try 2 update soon! Thanks for reviewing!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #8, by violetriddle Chapter Three: Wondering

2nd January 2008:
still love it..but the part when they took hermione home,dont u think they would have said something ab her goin wiht him.but then agian her parents dont care ab her anyway 10/10

Author's Response: Yea.. I probably should have said something about that... they don't care about her, and they think she's a freak... so I suppose they wouldn't care if she got taken by a stranger... Good Question! Thanx for reviewing!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #9, by Jaely Chapter Three: Wondering

1st January 2008:
great start to the story can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hopefully I'll be able 2 update soon! Thanx for reviewing!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #10, by midwinter_wolf Chapter Two: Discovering

1st January 2008:
don't worry no flames! good story, but arn't harry and hermione kinda young for a ship? Neway I loved it, so off to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yea.... any Harry/Hermione action isn't gonna happen til a couple of years down the road.... it's gonna start off as a friendship between them, and blossom in2 harmony... lol.... good question!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #11, by midwinter_wolf Chapter One: Meetings

1st January 2008:
This is good! And nice, like what you've done with harry and hermione! Cool, cliffie, I'll have to read on. . . . .

Author's Response: Yay! Another person likes my cliffie! U have no idea how much that means 2 me lol.... I had ppl threatning me... it was even worse b/c they're my friends and they kno where i live... *gulps nervously* Oh well... Thanks 4 reviewing!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #12, by midwinter_wolf Prologue

1st January 2008:
This is really good/sad! Poor hermione! I'm looking forward to reading the rest and thanks for the warning!

Author's Response: Thanks.... I feel really horrible about making Hermione go through that.... I'm glad ur enjoying it!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #13, by ananymous Chapter Three: Wondering

1st January 2008:
awesome!i love h/hr stories. hope you update soon

Author's Response: I love Harmony stories too! I'll try 2 update soon. Thanks for reviewing!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #14, by thegillitine Chapter Three: Wondering

1st January 2008:
I agree with the difficulty of making a banner. It's more difficult than creating a logo on Fire Pro Wrestling Returns. Thank you for the clarification. The only thing that is missing is something from Hermione's point of view.

Author's Response: I'm glad somebody agrees with me... that banner looked like crap.... lol. The next chappie will be in Hermione's point of view. Thanx for reviewing, and have a happy new year!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #15, by justadude Chapter Two: Discovering

8th December 2007:
aw! poor hermione! i hope moony and padfoot save harry and hermione. 9/10

Author's Response: I know! I feel sooooooooo bad for Hermione and Harry... all the stuff I'm making them go through... but hey.. at least they know she's a witch now! lol

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #16, by Deerose90 Chapter Two: Discovering

29th November 2007:
please update soon i love it so far even though it's sad at parts.

Author's Response: I'll hopefully be able 2 update it when I get home on Saturday...

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #17, by Potter n Mione Chapter Two: Discovering

26th November 2007:
Love it! Seems like Hermione has a bad home situation too...

Author's Response: *sighs* Yeah... poor Hermione! I'm really glad u like it!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #18, by LaurenT Chapter Two: Discovering

26th November 2007:
awww its over! just as i was starting to get into it

Author's Response: I know! I read it myself on word, and I was like wow! this goes by really fast... but the next chapter is almost out, I just have 2 type it! :P

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #19, by LaurenT Chapter One: Meetings

26th November 2007:
my head hurts from crying... but that was last chapter... not this one

Author's Response: Aww! I'm sorry! (I'm sorry 4 saying I'm sorry, but I apologize a LOT, even 4 stuff I didn't do...)

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #20, by LaurenT Prologue

26th November 2007:
you have managed to do what none of these M angst fics have done today, made me cry. I really need to cry, so thankyou

Author's Response: Um.... You're Welcome? I'm sorry for making u cry, but if u needed it...

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #21, by Cibbler Chapter Two: Discovering

25th November 2007:
You can't help but feel very very sorry for Hermione. I hope Remus can help her. I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I kno! I feel SO bad for her, and I'm the author! I feel bad for Harry too... (U'll c y next chapter) Thanx 4 reviewing!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #22, by CloudsAreMadeOfCandyfloss Chapter Two: Discovering

23rd November 2007:
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one... Candy x

Author's Response: *hehe* thanx for reviewing! I'm glad ur enjoying it

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #23, by ilurvedannyr Chapter Two: Discovering

23rd November 2007:
YAY! U UPDATED!!! I, personally, dont mind excuses, im sorry that ur friend is moving. :( Well..this chapter was awesome, the whole Harry finding out hes a wizard already! I luv this story, 10/10! update as soon as u can! ~ildr

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing! I've been so sad lately, b/c he's leaving, but, I've got a lot of writing done! :P I'll try to update soon!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #24, by thegillitine Chapter Two: Discovering

23rd November 2007:
The only negative aspect of this is that you leave so many spaces after you finish your note.

Author's Response: Oh No! I'm sorry! I'll try to fix that... thanx for telling me about that!

~HHrDanceLvR


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Review #25, by RainbowsArePrettyful Chapter One: Meetings

11th November 2007:
You have to update this...you really do!
I love it!

Author's Response: *hehe* I feel so bad that I haven't updated in a while, but I just haven't had the time... (and my brothers hogging the computer.... lol) but I have the next chappie written out, and it should be sent for validation sometime this weekend.

~HHrDanceLvR


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