Good story line. Please continue Report Review
please continue love it Report Review
Great story. When are you going to update again? Author's Response: I am going to update very soon just been busy lol. I am curenttly deployed to Iraq so not much time to update lol. Report Review
Like the way that went except Harry should of killed Voldemort just thenAuthor's Response: that makes it to obvouse to the readers I think personaly and trust me the death of Voldemort comes soon I promise you Report Review
Like the way the story is goingAuthor's Response: thank you I just posted Chapter 3 so I hope you like it when it Validates Report Review
Not bad, but you need to pay a little more attention to detail. You repeated yourself a couple of times and you said it was summer and the kids were running off to school. Since school is out, maybe the mall or pool. Something like that. Not bad at all. Good job.Author's Response: thank you West and stay good homie Report Review
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