this is great...i love this story please continue writing quickly
but can you make tom confese his love oh please this is lovely and breath taking ! Report Review
Hmm, i love the fact that you did a tom riddle/ OC but theres this little deatail that i cant seem to keep away. Its about her personality , It shifts from a sad emo girl to a happy one, keep it steady okay? But other than that i do hope you keep writing darling, I would root for you if you get a dobby award for this ;) Report Review
:D yay an update! And an awesome one at that! Can't wait for more. Report Review
Yay! Thank you for updating!
Haha it has been a long time :D
-Kismet Report Review
I'm in love with this story so far! It has enraptured me! Can't wait for more! :D
10/10 Report Review
please continue the story im really loving it since the beginning im checking for some time now and still theres no new chapter im looking forward to it ;-) Report Review
I really am enjoying this. I stopped reading Harry Potter fan fiction a long time ago. Quite honestly, it takes too much trouble to look up and I can never find what I want. At first, I was a Harry freak. Then, a Cedric freak. Then a Draco freak. Then a,Tom/Voldemort freak. Now, I think it's Slytherin in general, but I do favor Tom more. XD This is the only story that I do think that I'm still reading. Partly because I bookmarked it a while ago. I've bookmarked a lot of stories actually, this is just the only story that I still read. I really do love this story. I'm not going to go fan girly on you right now. Haha. I'm just telling you straight up, I love this story. I like it because there's not a lot of "Tom" in the series. Actually, there's very, very little. You quench my thirst, and the story is well written, researched, and as far as magic, wizards, and manticores go, haha, very believable.
I'm just now getting to the chapter thanks to uncomfortable circumstances, but I really do hope you continue rather quickly on the story. Haha. I enjoy it a lot. You're the only "Tom" story that I can safely say that I love, save maybe one other ((but I never finished it. bad ending)). Despite such a long review, I loved it. Please, do continue. I'm here for support!! ((holds up sign)) Haha.
P.S. Btw, you've got a 14/10 for me. Haha. Report Review
Love it. Love it. Love it. Report Review
Oh no!! Poor eva!! Keep up the awesomeness. ^.^ Report Review
okay, i love the story, but seriously, are you EVER gonna update the one on fanfiction? i've been waiting forever! Report Review
Love it. 14 out of 10. C: Report Review
so i said i would write a review on chapter 16.. and here i am :)
this story is so interesting i cant stop reading it!! i really LOVE the character Eva, and i think her and tom should get a little lovinn going on soon.. tom may be the dark lord and all, but he is STILL a guy :P
(i think it would be really cute because Eva would be so happy)
ahah anyways i really enjoy your writing and i would be so thrilled if you updated soon!!
(the person who is clearly not creative enough when thinking up names) Report Review
im really liking this story!!
and a couple chapters ago i looked up that guy you pictured as tom.. and he is SOO HOT
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im really looking forward to finnishing this story soo ill leave another review on chapter 16 :) Report Review
I love this story, I can't stop reading it!
Eva is such a cool character, well done with her. And I so want Tom to love her! But it's your story, so your choice =]
Update soon please!
Donna Report Review
ahhh another wonderful chapter. :) Report Review
That was a great chapter! Thanks for updating! I really like this story. Please keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you for your review :) I'm glad you enjoy Tom and Eva! I'm having such a hard time continuing, what now with school and all, but I am trying. Thank you for being patient (everyone!) Report Review
wow, that was intence. i wonder... what was tom thinking tho??? really... huhAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! For now, all we can assume is an educated guess in what goes on in the mind of the world's worst villian... Report Review
it was very good cant wait for nxt chap!
Keep writting!! Report Review
Pls write more ASAP! Report Review
NO!!! THE LAST CHAPTER! NO! Is Tom easing up?? OOoOOooh!Author's Response: No, Tom's not easing up soon. I'll update the next chapter when I can. Thanks for reading. Report Review
wow...thank you, that was a really awesome chapter, please keep writing more! Report Review
i love it i lvoe it i love it! it's been a while since an update. but that's ok! i loved it. Report Review
Lovely chapter, can't wait to read more. 10/10 I'd love to see that yearbook type thingie. So can you e-mail it to me at firstname.lastname@example.org? Thanks. Report Review
I really like this story, and I'm glad it's going to be uber long! 10/10
You Know You Love Me,
.:Princess Di:. Report Review
Wow, all I have to say is that Veronica Lake is awful pretty, and Vincent is cute in that 'dark mysterious' way.
Anywho, nice spin off. So she will be a Death Eater... OK, that sounds cool.
Oh and, you can learn Legimmans [sp], can't you? Snape tried to teach Harry, right???Author's Response: You can learn how to block people's mind, but you can't learn how to constanty read others' minds (or at least that's what I believe). Anyways, she conveintly forgot about that so... About the who they look like- yeah I like pretty people :D Report Review
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