Very well written!! Even though i was hoping for a happy ending for them, i really enjoyed the one you wrote. 10/10 Report Review
It is very good written and also so sad somehow. Really good job!Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you liked it! :)
Sorry I didn't respond in so long, I wasn't on HPFF for a long time.
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This was heart-wrenching :( A true Romeo and Juliet story where despite everything, it's impossible for them to ever have a happy ending together. I've always liked the pairing of Rose and Scorpius, despite how cliche some people might think it is, but it's something I've always been able to stomach better than Draco and Hermione. You've written Scorose so well and I especially liked having it from Scorpius's point of view, because arguably he has the tougher time with this forbidden love because of all the expectations and prejudices surrounding his family. A Weasley might be free to love, but a Malfoy definitely has to think twice. Again your writing is like poetry, gorgeous and descriptive yet never too overpowering. People would do well to study your writing and learn from it! 10/10Author's Response: I've also had a soft spot for the Scorpius/Rose pairing ever since the epilogue (I never was a Dramione sort of girl either), but I somehow never could see them having a very happy ending. Maybe once they were older and rid of their parents' influence, but definitely not while they were in Hogwarts. I also think that Scorpius definitely had it a lot harder than Rose since the Malfoy family lost a lot of its reputation after the war.
This particular story was supposed to be a sort of a summary for a novel-length story about the two that I never got around to actually write. Maybe someday I will... :)
Wow, thank you so much for the compliment!! Especially since I've been learning from your writing and the writings of a couple of other incredibly talented people here. ;)
Thank you, again, for this one and all of your other incredibly encouraging and wonderful reviews. *huggles* :D Report Review
Awww.This is definitely not a cheerful story but you managed the sadness so well that I have tears welling in my eyes! Excuse me, need to get a tissue.
Ah, that's better.
So anyway, the review, yes, the review.
I love the last three lines, its just so beautiful. Aww.
You're talented, and that's a fact. I love this and this is definitely a favourite!
~Kelly 10/10.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it... ^_^
I'm really flattered you think I'm talented especially because I'm rather a perfectionist and tend to be displeased with my stories upon reading someone elses I find much better...
Thank you so much for reviewing and, once again, I'm happy you liked it... ^^ Report Review
That . . . was . . . so . . . sad! T_T! But so well written!Author's Response: Well, I usually do write sad, angsty and hyper depressing stories so...nothing new for me... ^^
Anyway, thank you so much for taking time to review me. I really appreciate it! I'm glad you likied it!! Report Review
Wow that was really good. So descriptive and you really feel involved in such a little story, that's a great accomplishment. I think you wrote this really well and your description is really good. Forbidden love is always brilliant to read when written well and you did write it well! Excellent! Keep it up! For your first fic I think this is outstanding. The flow is good and it is understandable except right at the end it is slighlty confusing, but you can get understand it when you think about it. I couldn't see many grammar/spelling mistakes so well done! Awesome!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you think it's good...
I actually do plan on writing more Harry Potter fiction, especially now when I've become hyper obsessed after reading DH (which is funny because I never considered myself a true HP fan before...). I have two stories "in production" actually, one of them being Remus Lupin centric and shifting somewhat between the Marauders' era and HBP and the other is also Rose/Scorpius and resolving around this particular story, using it as some kind of a summary...
So, yeah, I was quite uncertain whether should I even write the latter since this oneshot can actually stand on its own, but I have such wonderful notes on it I'm so reluctant to let go to waste so...
Thank you again!! Your review really made my day.
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I think this is a really interesting concept that I would love to see in novel form!!!Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
I already have a lot of notes on that novel that I hope will be less confusing since it will be longer and with more place for detailed descriptions I'm already known of... ^_^
Thank you again for your review! I'm glad you like it! Report Review
I simply cannot believe that you have no comments!
What happened to her?!?
I Really love this, is it a oneshot?
I don't want it to be!Author's Response: ^_^ Well it's just been validated today so I'm not quite surprised...
It's supposed to be a oneshot, but I like to see it as a sort of a summary for this longer Rose/Scorpius story I already have some notes on. However, I'm too busy for writing it now, since all my stories end up fairly long and with a lot of chapters and various twists and turns, so it'll have to wait for a while.
I'm happy you like it story because it was so much fun writing it since it's the first Harry Potter story I've ever written... Report Review
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