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This is something different. The song is something that always goes under my skin when I listen to it. In here, it's almost painful and piercing and crushing. And so is the whole story. It breaks everything to pieces, searching for something in the core. I think you're a truly marvelous writer. I enjoyed reading this painful story. I enjoyed the way you portrayed both Sirius and Severus. It was strange, yet I could easily understand it. I've never read this pairing; I don't think I've ever even seen one. They hate each other so much. Well, my hate-love ship is of course Draco/Harry. There're so many things you can find through hatred. Anyway, I loved it. It hurt me, but I loved it. Thank you for sharing it. Report Review
That was fantastic. Really gritty. Me likes, me thinks..Author's Response: Thank you very much. Report Review
I think songfic is very hard and you did a really good job. (You also made me want to locate the song.) I actually read to the end wondering how you were going to resolve it --was it going to end with some kind of reconciliation?
It was also the least explicit sexually explicit story I think I've ever read.Author's Response: I try, I try very hard. I don't always succeed, but this fic holds a pretty special place, as it was wanting so hard to veer off into horribly NC-17 places, it was a fun challenge to write.
I don't think there would ever be a reconciliation of any sort between Sirius and Snape, no matter what sort of extracurriculars they participate in.
Thank you very much for enjoying it! Report Review
Wow. I don't even know what to say about that. First of all, let's discuss how incredibly well written it was. It was so borderline too, but you didn't describe any thing really totally vulgar, you let the song do that for you. It was more about the feelings, the moment, reahter than the act itself, and that's when you can tell a good fic from a bad one.
The descriptions were vivid, and I could picture it well (which was...weird for me, since That's not something I picture regularly)
I really dug the reference to Lily in there. Poor Severus. I can just see how carnal desires would trump everything else, and the real world would fade away in favor of crazy love. It could happen.
You've written a beautiful story here, even though it's a little wow. Love the song, NIN makes me happy, I love to scream the words to this song in the car and watch people stare at me funny. Great job. Love it like a fat kid loves cake and macaroni and cheese!! :)Author's Response: LMAO at the last analogy there. And yes, NIN is great, and happiness inducing.
I wanted to avoid mentioning any of the actual act itself,and I did fail a little bit near the end, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, and glad you thought it was good.
And so glad I managed to evoke a good image for you, despite it being something you don't usually picture.
And yeah, I had to sneak Lily in... I couldn't help it. But he's no monk, after all, and does need to fulfill certain needs some way.
I'm so glad you liked it, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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