Short, sweet and To-the-point!
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Awe, even though i dislike the Harry/Hermione pairing, i really liked this story, it was really sweet and fluffy, i think im going to start liking the paring... nice job. =)Author's Response: Thanks! This was my first fic so I was really nervous about whether people would like it or not! Report Review
it is a goood storyAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Its really good. It would be great if you kept going...add to the story.
Hope you do cuz it would turn out brilliantly.
Please keep going. You seem like a good writer. As long as other stories are H/Hr i will read them.
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sound like a great start,cant wait to see the rest:) Report Review
Although this was reasonably well written (I only noticed one spelling mistake, but I think it was a typing error - 'dorr' instead of 'door'), it is too short, it seemed to end way too fast. There needs to be more background information at the start, you don't really give the reader a chance to get to know the characters and their feelings. You need to get the reader emotionally involved with the characters, the reader should be feeling the same anger and sadness that Harry is feeling. Use more descriptions and give the characters more depth. Report Review
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