So good!! Please update soon! Report Review
this is good and quite interesting. is there going to be another chapter cos i would like to read sum more!!! Report Review
IT WAS REALLY GOOD, R U WRITTING MORE? Report Review
wow i lobee it.
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its really good and i rreeaally want to know what happens next. just one thing ...i dont think that rosier would suggest getting a prefect, it was a bit out of character. but maybe thats just moi.xxx Report Review
omg why?! i wanna know what happened!!!
i love it. update soon xD Report Review
Aww poor Bella, she's a really interesting charator. And how he thought Snape was *Loony* was hilarious.
update soon !Author's Response: Thank you, Jamie! Report Review
I love the PMS excuse, nicely done. If anything will shut a guy up quickly, it's that. Bad a$$ Bella's emerged, I like it. So as in mute, you mean she is never going to talk again, b/c if thats so she talks in the books so that'd be like a paradox, or is she gonna stop talking for a period of time? Dunno guess Ill just have to read to find out.Author's Response: She'll stop speaking for a period of time. Thanks for the review!!! Report Review
Nice topic and awesome summary (hey you got me to click on it)! I think that Bella was raped, just a guess for why else would she flip out at a male changing. Plus I'd like the way that you show how Bella is vulnerable, but dont lay it on too thick. I mean this is bad a$$ Bella we are talking about here. Other than that nice work.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm keeping my lips zipped for a while. You'll just have to read it to find out! Report Review
sounds interesting. i am keeping an eye on this story.Author's Response: And I'm glad you are. Thanks for the review!!! Report Review
Lol, ehmygawd, Whats wrong with wrong with her?!! I hope it isn't life threatening! Update soon please!
~jAiMeAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, Jaime! =] Report Review
luv it!!! :D keep up the writing!!!
10/10Author's Response: Hehehe, thank you very much!!! Report Review
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