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36 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ms simone Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

3rd May 2011:
an interesting storyline involving draco & luna!! love to see where this plot goes!!

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Review #2, by Anonymous Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

13th December 2010:
I really liked that! Super suspenseful, but kinda short. Still, nice job. :)

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Review #3, by noona Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

2nd March 2010:
Please do update , or send me the rest of the story !! i love it .. why did u stop it was getting good !!

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Review #4, by octoberose Interragation in the Study

30th December 2008:
Good story, but do you want me to redo your banner- it looks like it was made on paint?

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Review #5, by Kareena Malfoy Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

24th May 2008:
I await the next chapther

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Review #6, by dewl_dewl Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

15th May 2008:
please... I want to read more!

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Review #7, by julia Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

7th May 2008:
really really really great! your words just mesh perfectly.. as if i was reading right from the HP series.. please. CONTINUE! I am not really a fan of waitng.. so please.. CONTINUE.. L/D forever!

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Review #8, by weasley fan Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

12th February 2008:
awesome awesome awesome bloody hell awesome go on make it two next time and soon

Author's Response: oh....


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Review #9, by Tom_DracosGirl Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

10th February 2008:
Fab! I loved the explanation as to why these two have to be together. Luna I could see accepting this and trying to get along with Draco much quicker than he would be accepting of her, this type of thing would appeal to Luna I think.

I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great chapter, well worth waiting for!

Author's Response: You did?! I'm glad that you did!Yes, I can see Luna accepting it much quicker than Draco as well. Only, I think Draco has more acceptance in him than most people give him credit for. Oh well, I suppose that you will just have to see what happens.
Unfortunatly, I have the Flu right now, so it may ba a week until another chapter is posted.
Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #10, by slytherensangel26 Ancient Parchment and Crimson Blood

9th February 2008:
love it! this is wonderful! are those quills the same kind that Umbridge had?

Author's Response: If by "Like", you mean that they use blood to write, than I suppose that you can say that they are "Like" Umbridge's quill.
However, They did not cut either Draco's or Luna's skin. So, in that manner, they are not "Like" Umbridges Quills.
I'm glad that you noticed it though, it'll play into the plot in about 5 chapters.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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Review #11, by Reading Fool Deep Burgandy in Twilight

31st January 2008:
Most interesting chapter indeed.
I really liked the descptions of everything
when she was deciding what to wear.

Author's Response: Oh? REally? Neat! I thought that I was going over board. Thanks!
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Laura


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Review #12, by Tom_DracosGirl Through the Fire and into the Study

31st January 2008:
Great to see Lucius employees going all out to get away from his decorative tastes lol.

Reading that Lucius was looking over documents made me realise that I don't know what he actually does. Did it say in the books what Lucius job is?? Just curious if this is your own invention of a job for him or if I just can't remember what he does.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well...In the books it just says that he does something for the Ministry, but basically just goes around trying to influence people.BUT! What he does is going to be my own invention. Mostly.
Thanks for reading!
Laura


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Review #13, by griffindorprincess Through the Fire and into the Study

29th January 2008:
Hello,
I've just found this story and am already interested and amused! I love the idea. Please post more soon!!

Author's Response: There will most certainly be more postings soon! I'm so glad that you like what you have read.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Laura


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Review #14, by Sahara Through the Fire and into the Study

29th January 2008:
Cant wait for the next chapter!

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Review #15, by oni_yakamiza Through the Fire and into the Study

21st January 2008:
oO;
what?! What's going on? Why dont I know anything about Draco's ware. I am apolled to say this cliffy is torcher. You are evil.
~Oni~

Author's Response: Ha! I love reviews like yours.
They make me happy.
Thanks for reviewing!
Laura


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Review #16, by slytherensangel26 Through the Fire and into the Study

21st January 2008:
hey i would be happy to make you a banner now that i know how to make one. My email address is silentangel2581@yahoo.com ...what do you want?

by the way, i like the way the story is going!

Author's Response: You, by the way, Are so sweet.
Laura


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Review #17, by Tom_DracosGirl Away into the Flames

18th January 2008:
I really like the relationship between Luna and her father.

Luna's reaction to what comes next should be very interesting. Update again soon.

Author's Response: You do?
Neat!
It should be interesting...
I'll be sure to update uber soon, just for you.
And others.
Thanks for reviewing!
Laura


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Review #18, by slytherensangel26 Away into the Flames

17th January 2008:
oh man is she in for a shock...poor Luna!

Author's Response: Oh Yes!!
Yes, that she is.
Thanks for the review!


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Review #19, by Tom_DracosGirl Decisions, Decisions, Decisions.

11th January 2008:
I like this story a lot. I cant wait to see what happens when Luna and Draco finally come face to face!

Author's Response: oh! Thank you!!
Really, thanks.
Look for an update soon. Like a week.
Laura


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Review #20, by slytherensangel26 Decisions, Decisions, Decisions.

10th January 2008:
this is very intersting! i await the next installment!

Author's Response: That's great!
Laura


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Review #21, by slytherensangel26 Interragation in the Study

10th January 2008:
this is a good start!

Author's Response: thank you!
I hope that you continue to read it...it would make me very happy indeed.


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Review #22, by Tom_DracosGirl Deep Burgandy in Twilight

15th December 2007:
I'm slightly confused as to why they were sitting around Luna's bed?

Maybe that will be explained in the next chapter though.

Author's Response: Yup! I haev the next three chaps writen...I just need to have them posted.
Sorry!!
Laura


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Review #23, by oni_yakamiza Deep Burgandy in Twilight

30th November 2007:
I would've been more scared of why they were in my room...while I slept. Cant wait to read more. Great chapter, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! That was a nice review.
Don't worry, the next chapter is just waiting to be validated


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Review #24, by oni_yakamiza Parlor meeting

14th November 2007:
and the world crashes down on them. Cant wait to read more so update soon.

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Review #25, by Reading Fool Parlor meeting

12th November 2007:
Not bad a few spelling errors.
Though you do climaxes very well.
I look forward to reading more.
Til next time.

Author's Response: I hope that you will be reading more! Thank you for telling me about the spelling errors. It's just that i'm rather busy with NaNoWriMo and am accidentally overlooking small details. oops!

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