thats sad=( really sad=( but so real...

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i really like this one-shot thingymabob! it's written so well, i really enjoyed it. thank you!

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quite sad, but it was very well written, good job.

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okay, I won't review this one.

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Wow.

You have a really unigue writing style that is very effective. I really liked this! Great job!

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good...but sad

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That was really really great. I loved it! Amazing writing!

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Very good, I like the view of the apathetic Hermione. Interesting.
Elinwey Holonet

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Nice, kinda depressing, but nice all the same. I liked the way you described time like water, that was a cool simile. Keep writing.

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This was very good. Your descriptions were great, as well as Hermione's emotions. It got a little bumpy in the reading when Bellatrix saw herself in Hermione, but it picked itself back up. I really like the fact that you had Hermione not even flinch, move, or scream when the curse was cast at her. Great job, and even though it was short, I loved it.

Good luck on continuing to write fanfics. They are loads of fun, and I look forward to seeing more work from you. =D

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I liked it. It was very good, I got confused at some points, but other than that, it's fab.

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This is amazing - so moving, and so beautiful in its sadness. You are very talented, so keep up the good work!

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