Oh, this was adorable! I'll cut right to my favorite aspects of it -- I love that it's Molly chasing Arthur, not the other way around, and how fascinated he is with Muggle things while not actually getting the terms right. So canon!
I spotted one tiny mistake -- "MacGonagall." Should be McGonagall. That's honestly the only flaw I saw. This is so cute and sweet! I love how Molly pretends to pay attention while all she wants to do is kiss him.
Favoriting. :)Author's Response: Thank you very much for spotting that mistake! And I'm glad you like my story. :] Report Review
I love this story so much. First of all, because I can totally play this in my mind's eye and Molly and Arthur are like THE One True Pairing in the Harry Potter books. If you're going to write about Molly in a relationship, it always has to be with Arthur and that's just VERY sweet! I loved it and keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you and I will. :] Report Review
Awww...that was really very sweet. Well done!Author's Response: Thank you. :] Report Review
Hehehe! I really like seeing this from Molly's perspective along with her thoughts while not actually listening to him... Later on she'll want him to stop talking about all that muggle stuff! Very enjoyable!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Really cute! Highly enjoyable little fic. Definitely try a longer one of Molly/Arthur!Author's Response: Thank you. I will, as soon as I finish with my NaNo WriMo. :] Report Review
Cute :) It made me smile! Good job! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. :] Report Review
Ah, that's so cute, I love it.Author's Response: Thanks. :] Report Review
Beautiful! This is my new favorite ship. I wish you would do a longer one. I love the way you detailed her thought process. Great work!Author's Response: Thank you. I'm actually thinking of turning this into a full-lenght fic, so we'll see what happens... :] Report Review
good job i like itAuthor's Response: Thanks. :] Report Review
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