i actually love this story
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Great story can't wait to see the upcoming chapters!
Poor Ron I felt he got a little left out.maybe something great will be in store for him.Author's Response: I felt bad writing it, but Ron really has always been overshadowed in the books, and it is important to stay true to JKRs characters. I think the fact that he could deal with it and be happy for his friends and sister shows his new found maturity, and that is the important thing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
love the chapter update soon plz
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nice story keep it goingAuthor's Response: thank you for reviewing Report Review
it's brilliant! I loved it!
W.I.O.K! G.I.O.Q!Author's Response: thanks :) Report Review
love the story update soon plz
10/10Author's Response: thanks, a new chapter has been waiting to be approved for a few days, please check back soon. Report Review
Excellent! Keep going.it's brilliant!
Lovely tribute to Snape--he was very courageous...
Weasley is our king! Granger is our queen!Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, he certainly was. Report Review
Wow, this is fantastic. Great job with it. The chapters are the perfect length, your grammar/spelling is impeccable, and the story flows so nicely. Everyone is really in character, and the situations are realistic and believable. The last paragraph in this chapter was done extremely done and completely true; the war may finally be over, but now they have to deal with the aftermath. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much. Report Review
Please, please continue! I'm begging you! you made me laugh out loud and cry, and it was just AMAZING! Write about anything, the proposals, that summer, Fleur and Bill, Ginny and Harry, Ron and Hermione, anything! Just keep writing!Author's Response: I will, no need to beg. I'm glad I made you laugh, and sorry you cried, but that is the goal of storytelling after all, to make the reader feel emotion. Report Review
perfect ending! love it!!Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Oh my gosh, was that amazing! This is the exact sort of story that I've been looking for; it holds the answers to all of the questions. Amazing. The style of writing is definitely different from JK's, but it's still amazing.Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your right, my style is extremly different from JKR's, but I feel that any imitation of mine would not do her justice, so I might as well write it in my own way. Report Review
hey! like the story!!!
please write more!
ellie(xxmisspotterxxx)xAuthor's Response: Thanks, I will. Report Review
that was so sweet i love it:)Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Very well written, I really liked this chapter, the descriptiveness and the emotion was great. The only bit that I thought seemed out of place was when Harry said, “I was thinking, see, well Ginny, I thought maybe, since the war is over and all, maybe we could be together again”. It seemed kind of a tactless thing to say when everyone is in the middle of grieving including Ginny, and it didn't really fit with the flow of the rest of the chapter. Maybe there's a more subtle way you could have brought them together, maybe even without words??? Other than that one line though, I thought this chapter was brilliant!Author's Response: I understand what your saying, and where your coming from, however I do think that its important just how tactless Harry is. He is a seventeen year old boy after all, and I think the point is that in the midst of all the grieving, he finally realizes who he wants to be there with him in the end. Report Review
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