Awe!! That was sooo cute! I adore it!
You had me grinning like a complete idiot when Lily said 'Oh, god, you're such a sap!" and James replied "Only with you."- it was sooo sweet. I really really liked. but i noticed just one or two mistakes, but nothing major.
I'll still going to give you 10/10- for the lovely and heartwarming story
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OMG this one of the best James/Lily story have read. it's so beautiful; i loved it though am pretty sure James never had any doubt in marrying Lily. i love james. hey check out my story, it kind of good too. 10/10 Report Review
Really sweet! Report Review
Nice! Love it! Can't wait to read more stories from you!
PS: Can u read n review my story Dew Drops? Report Review
Good story!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
and this story made me loved this song, too.
Well done, really.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I love the song a lot, too...it was my inspiration :) Report Review
that was oh so sweet. i loved it!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
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