Great short story. I have read the three and was really impressed by this one. I love how Bellatrix thought and how she truly cared for andromeda.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm doubly glad you like Bellatrix's too, as that was the hardest to write, because she seems so emotionally cold. It was nice to give her just a little bit of depth :) Thanks for reviewing!

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That was really good:)

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The characterization here is really good, i especially like how she doesn't feel remorseful- it's very Bellatrix.

Author's Response: Thank you! I have to say, I felt rather disgusted with myself writing this ... getting into her head was HORRIBLE. *shudders* Thanks for reviewing!

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This was amazing! Very well written. No one really talks about Andromeda, I love her personality. She has such an interesting tale.
Well done!

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very good story!! I love it! :) 10/10

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You did a great job contrasting the sisters differences. I enjoyed all 3 chapters.

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I LOVE it!! This is the best story EVER!!!

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really good so far
update soon!

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brillian stroy, I always did like Bella, she is my favourite character out of the Harry Potter and ironically enough so is Sirius

Author's Response: Oh, I like Bellatrix myself, in a way, to be honest ... I'm not quite sure why, though *giggles* Thanks for reviewing!

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omg. this is sooo good. i would have never thought of it like this! 10/10!!

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That was great. I really liked reading it out loud and u did such a wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

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That was so good! I loved how your characterised Bellatrix...I really don't think there's enough Bellatrix stories out there that make her character whole and believable so, but you did it so perfectly. 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I find Bellatrix a very interesting character to read and write about, and I'd like to think that she has a real reason for hating muggleborns and muggles, and doesn't just base her views on her family's opinions. Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you read the other chapters, too :D

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This was really great and very well written. You've really made Bellatrix into more of a 3D character instead of just, she's a killer, she's evil, blah blah. I like hearing about her thoughts on her sisters, and just what goes on in her head. She's actually a human! Great job :) 10/10 definitely

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I like reading stories about Bellatrix myself, so I decided to write one ... and during that time, became interested in the other sisters, too. I'd like to think that Bellatrix had a proper reason as to why she disliked muggleborns and muggles - i.e. the loss of Andromeda's friendship - because I think it gives her more of a character, myself. Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm really glad you liked the chapter, and I hope you read the others on Andromeda and Narcissa :D

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