fast and to the point...its a nice quick read

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Haha, I loved the funny parts, and Romilda and Draco are awesome to read.
Nicely done.
xx

Author's Response: Thank-you so much! I really appreciate it!

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This is an alright story. It's a little obvious what Harry and Ron were suppossed to ask Ginny and Hermione from the beginning but the plot's really good.

Author's Response: Yeah I know it's a little bit obvious but it was a fun idea. Thank you for the compliment about the plot! Thx for reviewing!

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really cute so far.funny how people hear what they want to hear

Author's Response: Thank you!

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lol wow. thats crazy. im guessing they were asking the girls out for eachother. interesting start i wonder what will happen next! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, i hope you enjoy the rest

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i. like. the. idea. how. both. Hermione. and. Ginny. dont. let. the. guys. finish.

Author's Response: Thanks! There is a VERY important reason Hermione and Ginny don't let the guy talk. :)

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awesome. 10/10. i like what ron did to romilda and draco. he deserved it.

Author's Response: Thats Awesome! Thanks so much! Romilda and Draco are fun character to have in there, they provide a good laugh. :)

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You spacing is weird for this chapter. Have you tried using the writer option that you can switch to when you first put in your story? Because normally that's what clears that up. I like the humor in this. 8/10!
~Meg

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip i'll be sure to try it. I know the spacing is weird but i couldn't work out how to fix it until now, thanks.

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It's a short chapter, but I get the set-up. I like it. I'm going to read on. I gave it an eight. It's not exactly a very long chapter to judge anything by but the premise seems good thus far.
~Meg

Author's Response: Thank-you. It's very short but i feel if i wrote much more it would give the story away

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awww.how cute i could cry

Author's Response: thanks, it means a lot. Happy Holidays. :)


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HAHA YES!! "That Ravenclaw idiot" is the perfect comedic touch. And I like the bit on the brooms.

Author's Response: thank-you for all your review. They've been really great and helpful. Glad you enjoyed it in the end. :)

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...All right. That was interesting. No, better than that, I like Romilda's fangirl syndrome very much. She wins this chapter a point all by herself.

Author's Response: Romilda's fangirl syndrome is my little comedic touch to this chapter. Thanks for thr review


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Ok, are you using space between paragraphs to compensate for word count? It seems a little much.

Author's Response: I have no idea why that chapter has so many spaces. I think it got stuffed my by my computer.

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*raises eyebrows* Madam Pince is certainly low-tolerance today.

Author's Response: Yes, but there is a reason.... Thanks for reviewing.

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ha ha ha ha, very funny. Last chapter is the best.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love the last chapter 2. It's a great way to finish the story.

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FAB STORY.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you and thank you!

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I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I get such a gr8 feeling when i get good reviews. :D

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GR8 STORY SO FAR

Author's Response: Thx :)

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I change my mind this is my favourite chapter. It's awsome and beautiful. Oh the last bit is halarious. please write another story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I added the last bit in just 4 laughs so it's good to know it's doing it's job. lol.

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i LOVE this chapter it's my favourite so far.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! It's my favourite chapter (besides the ending:))

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You're a great writer. I love this story so far.

Author's Response: Thank you, also on top of your other review i'm working on a few ideas for other stories. I hope i get a winner soon

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cool, funny, beautiful. A perfect ending Jess

Author's Response: Awwwwww. Thanks Rach

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Oh i forgot to mention nice password. I think it's said not says.

Author's Response: Thanks, i'll check that.

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Hey Jess
Cool story so far, Sorry it took so long for me to read it. No i haven't got an account. But i decided to put that as my pen name so you know who it is

Author's Response: Thanks RAVM, Yes it did take you a very long time to read it!!!! Thats ok You've read it now. :D you should sooooooooooooo make that ur pen name

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i love this story it's so cute!

I LOVE IT!
I LOVE IT!

~~~mary_hpfan~~~

Author's Response: THANKS! I loved all yor reviews they were great. Glad you liked my story. :D

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