{reviewid: 2264400, reviewer: 'zapsgurl'}
| Review #1, by zapsgurl | Happy |
8th December 2009:
haha lol keep writin plz u rock
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{reviewid: 1987864, reviewer: 'karlita1'}
| Review #2, by karlita1 | Happy |
14th November 2008:
awesome:)
keepp it up!
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{reviewid: 1987829, reviewer: 'karlita1'}
14th November 2008:
JB:). yayy.
love it. gonna keep readinn
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{reviewid: 1987828, reviewer: 'karlita1'}
14th November 2008:
looove this chapter:).
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{reviewid: 1987824, reviewer: 'karlita1'}
14th November 2008:
O.O
wow.
awesome.
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{reviewid: 1987823, reviewer: 'karlita1'}
14th November 2008:
ohhemmgee
nice!:)
keep it up,
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{reviewid: 1987821, reviewer: 'karlita1'}
14th November 2008:
nice introductionnn :)
XD im gonna keep reading...
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{reviewid: 1951174, reviewer: 'Misk'}
13th June 2008:
MURDER! YOU! MUST! RIGHT! MORE! please please please please please make the next chappie longer! please *puppy face* i really do like the start you have going. please write more! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1935895, reviewer: 'ravenclawgirl47'}
29th May 2008:
it's really good. nice writing by the way.
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{reviewid: 1935894, reviewer: 'mindyhp009'}
29th May 2008:
anoter amazing chapter. loving it so keep writing.
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{reviewid: 1935893, reviewer: 'mindyhp009'}
29th May 2008:
wow.
this is a story I want to keep reading. good work.
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{reviewid: 1934221, reviewer: 'menagumy'}
26th May 2008:
i really like it please keep up the gpod work. the story rocks.
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{reviewid: 1934211, reviewer: 'menagumy'}
26th May 2008:
cool! :0)
fun. keep writing. reminds me of mean girls...
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{reviewid: 1930349, reviewer: 'helen_love'}
22nd May 2008:
Please write more.
Reading it is really worth it and fun.
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{reviewid: 1930347, reviewer: 'yruooe'}
22nd May 2008:
so cool. i love it! keep writing. i want more.
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{reviewid: 1930330, reviewer: 'realmodty'}
22nd May 2008:
cool.
like it. continue... it is AWESOME.
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{reviewid: 1926375, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
18th May 2008:
once again, great chapter!
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{reviewid: 1926366, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
18th May 2008:
great story so far!!!
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{reviewid: 1925890, reviewer: 'Siriusly_In_Love'}
18th May 2008:
Hey, i like this story so far, i am dying to read more. Please update soon 9/10
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{reviewid: 1917509, reviewer: 'minnievir'}
7th May 2008:
very good
but fix spacing
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{reviewid: 1917506, reviewer: 'gloglootooo'}
7th May 2008:
nice.
very nice. can't wait to read the rest.
btw i love Emma! she's cool
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{reviewid: 1651970, reviewer: 'lexy_gmn465'}
1st October 2007:
HI pinkypurple
love your story... cant wait till you update! I love Emma! She is so cool uuu and Alex is dreamy.
^^^Lexy
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{reviewid: 1648426, reviewer: 'gilmarie_perea_3%40hotmail.com'}
| Review #23, by gilmarie_perea_3@hotmail.com | Teenagers |
29th September 2007:
Gaby!
hey girl...great chapter keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1647558, reviewer: 'California'}
28th September 2007:
The beginning was pretty good. (It was actually My Chemical Romance that got my attention. They rock ;])
Read your first 3 paragraphs and you see the word 'really' alot. And in the second one, you begin 3 out of 4 sentences with 'he'. Just try not to repeat words so much.
There were a few more grammar mistakes in there, but they werent that important.
Alex and Emma are cute..lol but I sense Sirius coming into the picture somewhere in here =]
Overall the beginning was ok. It could have been better, but getting the story started is the hardest part (for me anyway..hate, hate, hate it) so I'll def continue reading this. Update soon!
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{reviewid: 1646941, reviewer: 'Regulus_Black'}
28th September 2007:
Great start, but did you mean in Ravenclaw not on Ravenclaw?
Author's Response: if you mean alex (thats what I think you meant... 0=) ) well yes he IS in ravenclaw.
thanks for reading.. :]
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