I can see that you've abandoned this story. : (
Please just tell me one thing. Lily and Josh start dating and end up married right? I can live without knowing their story as long as I know they end up together. Report Review
I think this should be called "A James and Lily Story".
It would be funny if somewhere along the way Slughorn comments about the similarities. Maybe have him accidentally say "Potter stop picking on Lily!" I'd love to see their reactions.
Funnily enough when I was reading this Kelly Clarkson's "My life would suck without you" was playing and it fit these two so well. Especially the video clip that goes with the song. They so have to get together in seventh year.
I wonder if deep down Carter secretly fancies her. You know what they say about boys who pick on girls? ;) And it would explain why his horrible to Harry. Someones jealous.
Cant wait to read more. Report Review
Hello! I was wondering if you have abandoned this story?
Please don't it's the only fic on this site, that is about a
first year, but still amazing! i would love to continue
reading about Lily and her friends untill they graduate!
Please continue, i'm a huge fan of yours, you are a brilliant
writer!Author's Response: No, I have not abandoned it! I am going to have to edit it, however, because I started it before the family tree was released, and it's not canon. Luckily, I was pretty close in guessing how many kids everyone had... But an edited version will be available soon. Report Review
cute i like that olivers good at being a healer!Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. Thank you for all your reviews. Report Review
ahaha love the fight between ron and hermione so realistic!
creepy person in blood red robes..the plot thickens!Author's Response: Thanks again for the review! Report Review
loved this chapter! laughed so much!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
OMG SHE BROKE HER NECK.
p.s this is sounding suspicously similar to the philosophers stone... although i love that Krum has been incorporated in the storyAuthor's Response: Yes, I thought that since fanfictions tend to be more Americanized and romance-based, I'd try to stick with the original style of the Harry Potter books... Hopefully not too similar, though! Thanks for the review. Report Review
so far im rather enjoying this! i like the conflict between lily and carter i can tell it's going to be very interesting!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Report Review
I know you haven't worked on this for a while. But PLEASE finish it! For one thing I want this prank war to resolve. Call me crazy, probably really crazy, but I think I saw some sparks between Lily and the Carter kid. (I probably am crazy). Anywho, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE finish the story! Every week or so I check to see if you have updated. So PLEASE! Update again or I swear I will go bonkers!!!Author's Response: I'm so sorry, I really do plan to finish this someday. But it needs to be edited first, because I wrote it a very long time ago and before the family tree came out, so it isn't canon. However, I can easily make it so, and am hoping to be able to sometime this summer. Thank you for your patience! Report Review
Hey, great chapter!!
Um.where exactly is Freak? You know, my absolute favorite fic on this site? Even if you weren't going to update it, it would be really nice if you could keep it on the site just so we could go back and re-read past chapters. :DAuthor's Response: Hello! Thank you for your compliments. I did not delete Freak, but it was hidden for I mistakenly put something in that I wasn't aware was against the ToS. It has been hidden and my TA status revoked, however the staff was very kind and is going to allow me to resubmit it one chapter at a time, with the necessary edits. I'll try to get on that as soon as possible. My apologies to everyone. Report Review
Loved the chapter and the fact that you updated :D
Just wondering, where's Freak? O.o I loved that story as well, it was amazingly hilarious.Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for your compliments. I did not delete Freak, but it was hidden for I mistakenly put something in that I wasn't aware was against the ToS. It has been hidden and my TA status revoked, however the staff was very kind and is going to allow me to resubmit it one chapter at a time, with the necessary edits. I'll try to get on that as soon as possible. My apologies to everyone. Report Review
Erm.. I came to see whether Freak got updated. But it is missing. I really hope you didn't delete the story. It was one of the best humour stories I have ever read and i liked re-reading it when I needed to cheer up.
We will understand if you have deleted Freak for some reason. I just wanted you to know that Freak will be missed. :D
I probably left a review for this chapter already. I miss this story as well.Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for your compliments. I did not delete Freak, but it was hidden for I mistakenly put something in that I wasn't aware was against the ToS. It has been hidden and my TA status revoked, however the staff was very kind and is going to allow me to resubmit it one chapter at a time, with the necessary edits. I'll try to get on that as soon as possible. My apologies to everyone. Report Review
Okay.. I love this story, your writing, EVERYTHING...but WHERE is Freak?! :'( I need that story! Please don't take it away forever. Those were the best 15 chapters I have EVER read! I would always re-read Freak when I felt sad. I know I sound pushy or whatever but PLEASE answer: Why did you delete it? D:Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for your compliments. I did not delete Freak, but it was hidden for I mistakenly put something in that I wasn't aware was against the ToS. It has been hidden and my TA status revoked, however the staff was very kind and is going to allow me to resubmit it one chapter at a time, with the necessary edits. I'll try to get on that as soon as possible. My apologies to everyone. Report Review
OMG. You are replying to reviews again. I will no longer have to worry about this story being abandoned. thank you. will wait patiently. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the review... I'm sorry it's been a while since I've even replied to reviews. My real life has gotten so out of control. It turns out that high school seniors have barely any time to do anything. :P This story isn't abandoned... but it is going to be a rather long time until it is updated. I'm doing my best! Thank you for being so patient. Report Review
Please update soon!!! :( It's been ages! Have you abandoned the story? Please don't I love it so much! :(Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I know it's been a very long time since I've updated, and that's because I'm planning on doing some major revision to the existing story to make it more realistic, canon, and improve the writing in general. Once I've finished these edits, I'll continue updating. But this may not be for a very long time. Thank you for your patience. Report Review
Oh. My. Goodness!!
That was so, SO freaky! I thought they were goners, really!!
I cannot believe there luck, with the rock and all. I wonder what that was about and everything!!
Really, really good chapter! I still cannot believe that the library teacher is a murderer! I mean, who would have thought that she could kill someone!!
They are really, really stupid though!
And how did they know that they were in her office before?
Really, really good chapter!!!
Update as soon as you can please!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad that you liked the chapter. Everything that happened in it will be explained... eventually. But some things- like the rock- may not be explained until much, much later. Really, thank you so much for all of the wonderful reviews you left. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I hope that you don't need to reread it once I've finished editing, and I hope that it won't be a year before I get the chance to do so and to update. I thank you in advance for your patience and for all the time you took to read and review. You have no idea how much it means to me. Thank you. Report Review
I cannot believe them!! TWO Gryffindors are going against their team, and are going to break them apart! I cannot believe it! It is pure evilness! I am telling you! I cannot believe Tray would do this to them!
And they are so ridiculously STUPID!! I cannot believe that they're going to sneak into her office again! They could get hurt! Or caught! Or something!
I cannot believe they'd do this! They are mad! I am tellin' ya!
And I am SO glad that Oliver got a job!
That is so adorable!!
Really, really good chapter!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Wow... You used quite a few exclamation points there. Yes... the Gryffindors are behaving despicably. Definitely pure evilness. As for sneaking into her office- yes. They are ridiculously stupid. But the Potters and Weasleys seem to do a lot of ridiculously stupid things. That's why they're Gryffindors. Or is that supposed to be bravery? ;) Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I hope you enjoy the last one. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
My goodness, the ending got tears in my eyes!!
"As she went, she couldn't help thinking that Olivier had found this gift at last" I mean, in the last chapter he was going on and on about him having nothing special about himself, and then this happened, it's just so sweet.
I loved what he was saying about Ravenclaw, just sayin'
Also, I feel so bad for Rose! I mean, she was getting all crazy from Scorpius being all hurt and everything! I would have to have to hide my feelings!
I really, really liked this chapter, especially then ending (:
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I felt so bad for poor little Olivier... I had to give him something. And, yes... He did get his revenge on Ravenclaw. Rose is going through a bit of trauma, too. But we shall see how it all turns out, and whether anyone picked up on it. Thank you, again, for reviewing! Report Review
Ha, that was hilarious! With Emily telling her that they snogged ALL the time, and then them getting hung by their feet!!
But I feel SO bad for Oliver! I mean, getting embarrassed in front of the whole school! But at least Lily helped him out (:
And then Zoe, sticking up for Elizabeth like that when they found out what the girls were laughing at!
I loved that!
I felt bad for her though, but at least they all made them look really, really stupid!!
And then Hugo, finally coming to his senses about them being evil!
Now, hopefully he will get together with Rebecca!!
Really, really good chapter!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for all of these reviews. Really. They're making me remember how much I loved writing this story. I think I might actually start my editing tonight. I just hope it won't require you to reread, especially since you've only just read the entire thing. I'm so sorry! As for Hugo and Rebecca getting together... Well... We'll see. Thanks, again! Report Review
Hehe, "Don't let the purple monkey steel my cheese!" HAHA!!
I cannot believe that Krum is in on it! I mean, I had no idea that he was a murderer!!! It's kinda freaky! What if there are more people in on it!
I really, really liked it! Especially when Emily and that one bloke snogged each other! That was hilarious!!
I really, really liked this chapter!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Zoe is a bit crazy... Yes. As for Krum, and whether there are even more people in on it, you'll just have to wait and see. I had a lot of fun with Emily and Andrew. Thank you for the review, again. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Report Review
Oh. My. Goodness!
This chapter was totally amazing!!
When Teddy and Victory kissed I smiled! It was SO cute!!
I really, really like them together!
And then the food fight, that was really,really funny!
With Molly Weasley and Victory fighting about their food, and which is better, and everything!
And then Ginny's stuffing! I thought that was pretty hilarious! And the end, when it was all like
"She was up all night with food poisoning" I LOVED that!!
Really, really good chapter!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I had so much fun writing this chapter. I thought it would be a good relief from all the murder drama that was going on during Lily's year at Hogwarts. I have a lot of fun imagining Ginny to be a terrible cook. Thanks, again, for the wonderful review! Report Review
Really, really good chapter!
I cannot believe he took it as a prank!! That is totally unfair! And now they know that someone is on to them!
I am like totally freaked out right now! What if they find out it was them, and someone gets hurt!!
I really liked it, especially that they are going to have the prank war! I cannot wait for that!
Really, really good chapter!
Nice job! (:
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I can barely remember what happens in it, but I'm glad you liked it, nonetheless. Thank you so much for taking the time to review all these chapters, and I hope that it won't be too long until I manage to edit and then update. Thank you, again! Report Review
Wow... I don't even know what to say!!
I mean, are they both murderers? Or is it some big misunderstanding?
And wow, Gryffindor losing the game because of that big fight with Emily and the other beater! My goodness, that is crazy.
And Sam! Aww, how adorable, they both like each other (Or so I assume) I really liked this chapter, but it actually is quite terrifying, not knowing if they both did kill the girl!
I really hope they didn't. :O
Really, really good job!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story, and I appreciate the time you took to review every chapter. As for whether the two professors actually did murder the little girl... You will just have to wait and see! Thanks, again! Report Review
OH. MY. GOD!
This chapter was so SCARY!!
Rose and Scorpius were snogging!! Yayyy!
But anyways, is she a murder!?!?!? I really wanna know!
Is the girl dead? Oh. My. Goodness!
Such an interesting chapter! I am like freaking out!
I don't know who it is.. it can't the her, can it?
I mean, she is a library professor!
I really, really liked this chapter though!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad that you liked the chapter. I remember how difficult it was for me to try to write something suspenseful. I hope you like the rest of the chapters, too. Thanks, again! Report Review
My goodness!! I wonder where her Diary is! I really, really hope she get's it back soon! :O
And I am totally confused! Who was that person in the library? And then when she said that she heard a scream! Who was that?
Hehe, they got all the professors drunk! That was hilarious! And Professor McGonagall was snogging Professor Slughorn! That is HILARIOUS!!
I really liked this chapter! Especially the ending, when Ginny said "And you wonder why they're pregnant again" hehe, funny stuff!!
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! You will find out the answer to all of your questions in due time. But, I'm afraid, a lot of the things you liked about this chapter will be changed. It's just all so very unrealistic. And I will not be making Ron and Hermione pregnant again. The teachers will not be drunk, and McGonagall will not snog Slughorn. I hate to be the bearer of bad news. XD But it just won't work with what I want the story to be. Report Review
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