really good! can't wait for the next chapter. But, I'm slightly confused, when is she going to meet her parents, well, properly - I mean with them together? Report Review
Really good story. can't wait to read the next chapter.
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this chapter is amazing. i can't stop reading your story it's so good!Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for reviewing. The next chapters will take longer to be posted b/c of school and I haven't written them yet. Report Review
Favorite chapter of all! Great work! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. And thank you for reviewing. I'll send you the next chapter as soon as possible. Report Review
interesting beginning. . . .more please!Author's Response: Thank you. And thank you for reviewing. I'm going to post ch.3 very soon.
Lurve this chappie, of course!!! Wonder who your beta is. OH yeah its ME your best buddy!!! Just kidding. Totally added to top favs!!! Update soon! 10/10Author's Response: Just finished ch. 5. Lurve your stoy too! By the way your the BEST beta some one could have. Report Review
Nice plot. But has alot of runon sentences.Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on those sentences. Report Review
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