Oh that last line was so funny! And I'm glad you got her a cat for a pet, since I love them!
If you like you can read some of my fics, I've posted 4 of them here. One is a sequel to the other, so if you like start with the Very Best Thing, it's my first Severus novel, though definitely NOT my last.
I can't wait to read more, so please update! 10/10 Report Review
Well, I bet that was a shock, and I'm glad it was McGonagall and not Dumbledore that came to her, it's good tos ee some of the other professors taking a more proactive role here. Report Review
Cool, I really like this story so far. I'd never have imagined the perfect Lily as being tormented at school. Then again, children can be really cruel to those who are different. Too bad Petunia isn't the type to defend her little sister, mine would've put the fear of God into anybody who hurt me.Author's Response: Well Petunia is the type to defend her sister. She just isn't the type to loose her popularity over something like her sister. Report Review
This is another cute, interesting chapter. It's hard for me to picture Lily being young, so great job!Author's Response: Thanks, it was hard to work it out, but I have a lot of friends her age, so I just pictured what they would do. Report Review
I like the way you start this out. It's interesting to see your view of what Lily was like. The way she ends up on the roof is reminiscent of something I think I read that Harry did. Anyway, good start!Author's Response: I may have taken the idea from the books... And thanks! Report Review
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