I reallylike this story, its very good. i am also a mental weirdo like her but im a bit louder ...
well, tis goot.
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Loved this story, but just some advice, take out the last quote. It ruins the feel of the ending.
But otherwise, fantastic story!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
I like your taste in music :]]
and the story of course ;]Author's Response: Haha, thank you! My taste is just a mish-mashed hodge-podge of stuff, really.
Thanks for reading! Report Review
She is so awkward and adorable I love her :)Author's Response: Haha, thank you for your review! Report Review
Sweet story. Definitely made me feel the emotion elenor went through. Wish they would have gotten together sooner though... Report Review
:'( made me cry... Elenor is having a really bad day. Report Review
Intense... I love it :) Report Review
Loved the snowball fight! I wish the maraders would pull some pranks though... Report Review
There are really not enough words to describe how well-written this is. Its fairly lengthy and I just went ahead and read this for the second time and realized that this is, indeed, the first ever Sirius/OC fic I ever read and I still read it till today.
You are sheer brilliance, keep writing so I can keep reading. You have such talent.Author's Response: Really? You think so? Looking back upon it, I get a little embarrassed by how cliched it all is, and how much I ventured into Eleanor's internal monologue. Never ashamed, though, just a little embarrassed by it, but it makes me so happy to hear that you still read it from time to time. This was the first story I ever finished so it holds a special place in my heart - even if it is a load of bollocks at times, haha.
Thanks for the review! Report Review
AH I can hardly contain my excitement. This entire story was beautifully written. Absolutely in love with Ellie, she is adorable. I just wish we knew a little more about how Sirius felt for her, other than that, it's one of my favourite stories ever, no joke!Author's Response: Oh wow, that's a huge compliment to pay someone. I wrote this when I was a lot younger and wasn't as familiar with what made a good, fleshed-out sorry, so if you could forgive me for that!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
This story is just so... Wicked!
I mean, at some points I literally couldn't bare the tension, and I'd go and read the reviews, just to prepare. Eleanor went on my nerves during the first few chapters, but, slowly, I fell in love with her. And with all the characters, really. Minor spelling mistakes, but, in the bigger picture, completely irrelevant. The only downcome is that, like another reviewer already said, your descriptions of kisses made me a little bit jealous. Which, of course, means that those descriptions are terrific!
Fabulous story!Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you for all of your kind words. It makes me so happy when people enjoy my older works so much. There weren't my best, but boy did I have a good time writing them!
Thanks a million! Report Review
haha! finally! she's realized she's fancies them.. omg she fancies them both. this is going to be very interesting..
I just wanted to point out that a few sentences kinda seem like they have words missing.. brilliant chapter though Report Review
is it even possible to get nosebleeds from high altitudes? hahahaha, and oh my goodness, "maybe gravity decided that it didn't want so much blood in my brain and said "nose, you shall bleed, and you shall bleed heavily."
i died laughing when i read that. siriusly. Report Review
amazing. you're such a fabulous writer, technically hardly anything's even happened between eleanor and sirius, or remus for that matter, but i haven't even had time to be bored because its so fascinating :D love love love itt/ Report Review
i would really love a Sirius POV right about now. Report Review
oh, the suspense! i feel like something bad is going to happen.. Report Review
wow. just wow. that was scary. but i liked it. :D Report Review
i love this chapter image, Lucinda right? it fits her perfectlyyy.. just one thing, you tend to spell arithmancy "Athrimancy" .. otherwise, amazing as always. Report Review
i loved this chapter! i have to say, i love your descriptions of slughorn, he sounds completely ridiculous! and eleanor's 'moments' with remus and sirius.. shes so oblivious. heh. hehehe. Report Review
absolutely brilliant, I love this story! eleanor's mind is bloody hilarious omg, its amazing Report Review
NO! Sirius ):! I can't believe she did that to him ):! Report Review
It was really, really nice story, I have to say. I enjoyed it a lot.
Before I start my review I want to warn you that English isnít my native language and Iím pretty sure I will make some terrible mistakes so please, forgive me ^^.
So, getting to the point. There were some parts that actually impressed me - like the way Eleanor felt and acted, just the way a girl who has been so lonely for a very long time should feel. I've seen a lot of fanfics where a main character is a girl with no friends (and suddenly finding them), but the girl always acts like every other casual girl who has always had friends (or at least one friend) and I've always found it very annoying Ė why people do things that they obviously canít do? No idea.
I wasn't annoyed while reading your story - and I think this is the first story Iíve read of that, hmm, sort (?) when a main character acts just like she's suppose to. (Actually I'm a big fan of Eleanor ^^.)
Well, your story has also it's minuses. Sirius and Remus were far too perfect. I mean itís not like I canít find any faults, but they all are so small and unimportant. Way too perfect.
I also noticed that you have some favourite expressions. I didn't write them down, but there are some words which you has always been using together in specific situations. Using them on different people, so it was really noticeable. I don't know if you understand what I mean - I'm terrible with explaining xD.
Sorry for my poor language and all mistakes I made.
It was pleasure to read.
Nadia Report Review
Nice chapter, although I think that the part where she's trying to escape Sirius a bit too long and too precise - I kind of just skipped it, sorry! Report Review
I've been digging through every possible completed story about Sirius Black and an OC (which I haven't already read) for almost an hour, and your story is the first to make me want to keep reading. Good job, me gustas! :) Report Review
Well, I'll like to say that I was a tad bit disappointed with the ending...
It IS appropriate, and it leaves the ending open for us to complete it ourselves, but yeah...
And I just love Remus in this story, I was kinda sad that he didn't end up with her, but that can't be helped eh? Report Review
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