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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Megan and Charly love HP Where You Go When She Sleeps

24th August 2009:
OMG! SO SUPER ADORABLE! amazing job! U really need to keep writing LJ one shots! I will read them I swear! *Claps and lots of cookies*-Charly

Author's Response: I will...I figure out something to write. Thanks so much.

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Review #2, by Smith_Babe_1 Where You Go When She Sleeps

29th January 2008:
Awww that was so sweet lol aww bless them lol

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Review #3, by emi potter Where You Go When She Sleeps

25th October 2007:
wow that was amazing


Author's Response: thank you

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Review #4, by la vita è bella Where You Go When She Sleeps

14th October 2007:
Hi!! Your fic is very beautiful and sweet but there are also a lot of grammar mistakes that marr it a little...However I must say that the story is a tiny bit sexist (or at least I interprete it like this) because.I don't know, but it gives me that feeling... However compliments and Toodles!!!

Author's Response: interesting...thanks though.

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Review #5, by asdfa Where You Go When She Sleeps

5th September 2007:
the only smile he gave to her
"the smile he only gave to her"

she knew that she wasn’t a prize to be one
"she knew she wasnt a prize to be won"

wow. this story needs help its very good just it needs to be beta read because theres alot of errors and the sentinces are choppy.

Which he laid her on the bed and started to make love with her.
thats the most random line i've ever read in the story. i dont even think its correct. sorry. you need to fix this

Author's Response: I know I need to fix it. I do have a beta, and she has the story. But it will be fixed thanks.

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Review #6, by Daisy_Potter Where You Go When She Sleeps

3rd September 2007:
a couple of grammatical errors but other than that it was written very very well.ehehe...great story!

Author's Response: Thanks, I do have problems with grammer always have had those kind of problems. Thanks.

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