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Review #1, by skyecoo Forty-One

11th July 2013:
.but but but.
She has to still love Sirius.
She has to..

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not :)

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Review #2, by Sophie Black Thirty-Nine

1st September 2012:
He is NOTHING like my Edward thank you very much! Hmph

Author's Response: Err, okay then :D GOOD FOR YOU!

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Review #3, by Vanessa Fifty-Four

28th April 2012:
I absolutely LOATHE you for writing such an AMAZING story and writing a dang cliff hanger! Awesome job though, and I can't WAIT to read the sequel!

Author's Response: OH! You should move on to the sequel, although it's not even CLOSE to being completed yet. Currently having some issues with it... mwehh, anyway, glad you liked it!

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Review #4, by NightCrimson Fifty-Four

11th April 2012:
He proposed! He proposed! He proposed! He proposed!
Wow..the story's over..her school life's over..O.O
Thanknyou..for writing such an amazing story!
Imma gonna go and read the sequel so see you again! ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you :)

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Review #5, by NightCrimson Forty-Nine

11th April 2012:
It's sweet..:)
I just wish the scene was longer..I mean the last scene..

Author's Response: Aww, sorry about that :(

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Review #6, by NightCrimson Forty-Eight

11th April 2012:
Damn..they kissed..:P:P
Well written though..:)
I like the whole splashing scene..:D

Author's Response: haha, thanks :)

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Review #7, by NightCrimson Forty-Seven

11th April 2012:
No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no!
No freaking way!!!
Please I beg you NO!
Please don't let Sirius kiss her! Please please please no!

Author's Response: No? That's a first one xD

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Review #8, by NightCrimson Forty-Six

11th April 2012:
Yay yay yay yay!
Alex is so nice!(I'm so sorry.. I have a feeling I'm spamming you with all these review gushing about Alex only!xD)
Yay yay yay yay! (yeah again..sorry!)
This chapter's so..happy?xD

Author's Response: It's totally fine! Understandable, actually :D He's pretty perfect :)

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Review #9, by NightCrimson Forty-Four

11th April 2012:
Y? Y is the ending going to be a cliffy? :P:P
Oh and I gotta say this again, WHY IS ANNA SO NOBLE?!
Remus owes her- BIG time and Sev's dead..
Sirius is gonna punch him to death or what? xD

Author's Response: lol... seriously, though - I think the ending will be a bit of a cliffie :D

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Review #10, by NightCrimson Forty-Three

11th April 2012:
I was so sad in the beginning but thank god for Anna asking Alex to go for the ball!!! Yay!! :)
I'm happy again! xD

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #11, by NightCrimson Forty-Two

11th April 2012:
NO! Poor poor Alex! :'(
I can't believe it! ( even though I expected it..:P)

Author's Response: Haha, didn't think Alex would get this much support!

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Review #12, by NightCrimson Forty-One

11th April 2012:
Too old for Pokemons..xD
You're so funny..xD
Great chapter..:)
I love the Anna/Alex scene..
I don't feel like reading the future chapters because I know Anna will end up with Sirius..:P
I like Alex so much! xD
It's funny really because I like Sirius so much..xD

Author's Response: Pokemon is awesome, actually.
Too bad my son thinks they are 'uncool'

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Review #13, by NightCrimson Forty

11th April 2012:
Hey! I like reading this story because it's different!
Ive also read loads of other Sirius/OC stories but the protagonist isn't a werewolf! Nor does she date someone else after Sirius!
I love this story! It's really really good! Trust me! :)
And this chapter's so sweet..:)
I like the conversation between Remus and Anna..

Author's Response: Thank you!
I just wanted to try something different - as cliché as that sounds - but everyone knows she's probably going to end up with Sirius... unless someone dies xD
I'm SO going to get hit for saying that -.-

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Review #14, by NightCrimson Thirty-Nine

10th April 2012:
Believe it or not, I love you for this! So sweet!
I'm grinning like an idiot right now..xDxD

Author's Response: Haha, thank you :D

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Review #15, by NightCrimson Thirty-Eight

10th April 2012:
James is so nice..o.o
Alex is so cocky but sweet..o.o
Lily's so like me..o.o
Remus's is absolutely awesome..o.o
Sirius's is moody..o.o
I love you.

Author's Response: That's like a freaking poem, dude :D But yeah, I love the idea that you relate with Lily - such a tough character to relate with in this story and THIS version of her xD

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Review #16, by NightCrimson Thirty-Seven

10th April 2012:
Bahahahahahahahahaha that was so FREAKING sweet of Alex! Omigosh! You made fall in love with him! :O:O
So so very cute..:)
And also Anna blushed! WHOOP WHOOP! :D:D
This story just gets better and better..:):)

Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review! :)

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Review #17, by NightCrimson Thirty-Six

10th April 2012:
Dudette, every guy you introduce in Anna's love life, is so amazing! I like each and every one of them!
Alex is annoying but I find it really cute:)
Oh and guess what? I watched Titanic yesterday..>.>
so that scene was a bit cliche for me..but sweet nonetheless..:)
PLEASE PLEASE I HOPE THE DATE GOES WONDERFUL! And that Sirius doesn't ruin it! xDxDxD

Author's Response: Ah yes, I am made of clichés! Not in real life, but when I write fanfictions, they just... suffocate the entire story xD

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Review #18, by NightCrimson Thirty-Four

9th April 2012:
Ya should be ashamed of yerself! You made me hate Sirius for the first time in my entire life!
Poor poor Anna! And I hate Anya already..>.>
I was practically screaming that in my head while reading the chapter and even winced when Alice said he snogged 20 girls..damn him..:/

Author's Response: Well, it's not actually a known fact that he snogged those girls. I believe Alice said she "heard" something about him snogging 20 girls - you know how rumors start out of nothing, and just keep getting bigger and bigger the more the rumors go around? Yeah.

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Review #19, by NightCrimson Thirty-Three

9th April 2012:
OH MY GOD! You turned the ENTIRE story around! I am SO shocked! :O:O:O
My reaction: Anna, a werewolf? *gasp*
Her mother's alive and is a death eater?*gasp*
Fenwick her uncle?!? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!? Holy god!

Well written! Amazing work I should say! The story just keeps getting better and better...;)

Author's Response: It's like freaking "Days of Our Lives" :D

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Review #20, by NightCrimson Thirty-Two

9th April 2012:
Wow..that's the only word to describe this chapter!
I was so surprised when Anna cut herself! What is up with all the protagonists being so bloody noble?:'(
They make me feel so bad! :'(
Well done though! A couple of spellings above, but otherwise good work..

Author's Response: Ah yes, I am aware of the spelling mistakes and typos... so sorry :(

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Review #21, by NightCrimson Thirty-Two

9th April 2012:
Wow..that's the only word to describe this chapter!
I was so surprised when Anna cut herself! What is up with all the protagonists being so bloody noble?:'(
They make me feel so bad! :'(
Well done though! A couple of spellings above, but otherwise good work..

Author's Response: Ah yes, I am aware of the spelling mistakes and typos... so sorry :(

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Review #22, by NightCrimson Thirty-One

9th April 2012:
I like that part with Severus..(although I didn't expect Sirius to shove Severus with Anna and leave them alone..)
You know what? Although I love Sirius, I'd still make Anna best friends with Severus..:)
They just seem so made for each other friends..:)

Author's Response: He didn't? o.O

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Review #23, by NightCrimson Thirty

9th April 2012:
First of all: congrats on your baby! :):)

As for the chapter, it seemed a bit filler-ish but it's not bad..:) the last part is pretty childish but I like the rest of it..:):)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks, I suppose? xD

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Review #24, by NightCrimson Twenty-Eight

9th April 2012:
Haha you're right! Made me feel all fuzzy too...xD
It was pretty cute really:):)
Really well written:)
I want to know if it was easy for you..I mean writing all this..
I began writing a Sirius/OC fan fiction but I find the romantic parts a bit hard..:/
They never turn out to be as good as yours..;)

Author's Response: Ah, well, I love writing them because I'm a perv xD No, I just have a lively imagination. Of course, the husband said I should stop giving ideas to young readers :D He said I'm giving them false hopes and expectations "no one can reach" - which he is totally wrong about, to be honest xD

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Review #25, by NightCrimson Seven

3rd April 2012:
This chapter confused me a lot..:/:/
I'm not sure I follow the story properly..:P

Author's Response: Ah, it did? How? xD I think this was one fo the less confusing one, though... but mwehh, thanks? :D

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