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Review #1, by mashforever Elodie's Realization

13th September 2011:
This is good writing; the only problem is that I'm pretty sure the Marauders didn't let anyone know about their secret nicknames. Otherwise, continue on, this is getting good!

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Review #2, by seeker4u Elodie's Realization

14th September 2007:
REAT STORY SO CUTE!

Author's Response: Thanks hun! :hug:

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Review #3, by Ravenclaw Rocker Elodie's Realization

3rd September 2007:
Hey there, Kenzie. Just reviewing the story you requeted I review. ;)
Okay, there were a couple things that confused me. "...Her breath was leaving me." Shouldn't it be something along the lines of Her breath was leaving. I mean obviously, I'm not you, but that part really confulzzled me. And centaur is spelled wrong. You spelled it cenataur. Too picky. I know. :)
Other than that, it was a really good story. :) I have no more complaints amazingly. ;)
Gen

Author's Response: Hey Gen! I must've missed one. I originally wrote this in first person, before realizing I suck at first person. :P So I changed it. But I missed that one. :hides: I changed the cenataur spelling, too. Thanks so much; glad you like! :hugs:

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Review #4, by Daanana Elodie's Realization

3rd September 2007:
I like this so far, it's very promising. I like Sirius - duh - the way you wrote him and the girl, Elodie, is pretty cool as well.

Author's Response: People have been saying they like Sirius, which makes me happy. I absolutely refuse to make Sirius the cliche he's become. So people liking it is yayh. I'm glad you like El, too. Thanks so much, loff! You rule!

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Review #5, by Aligiah Elodie's Realization

1st September 2007:
*snags good karma* Sorry I didn't review earlier! *gives some good karma back* I really like El, she's cool, and smart. I can't say much now, but I may have to re-review later using my secret spy tactics. lol

10/10

Alex

Author's Response: :hands Alex the given back karma: Nah, keep it. You rule. Glad you like El! That's exciting! To tell you a truth, she's one of my fave OC's of mine, after Anne Marie from DWTR. But don't tell anyone, cuz that sounded conceited. :P Thanks Alex!

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Review #6, by HrXd Elodie's Realization

29th August 2007:
Very nicely done. I loved the description of fear and hope so vivid. I also loved the way that you wrote Sirius that was just wonderful. Great job.

Author's Response: YAYH! You think I did Sirius well?! That's especially exciting! I tried to make him still prat-ish, but not evil. Like...ya. So thanks sooo much Sammy, you rule!

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