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Reading Reviews for A 7th Year

4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Squibwife

9th September 2007:

I think that your story plot is fine, however I would work on making sure your braking things down in a logical way and putting as much detail as you can so that we are really getting the picture that you want us to have. I really do think that you should write more.

Author's Response: thanks i really didn't think it through and that's why i abandoned it put reviews are helpful though

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Review #2, by the raga muffin

Getting Over Grief

3rd September 2007:

i can tell it is gonna be a good story but the way u wrote it was awful no punctuation and u dont no whos talkin when it really was confusin good plot but if u dont improve ur writing then theres no point of u continuing is there as i personally find it difficult wat u are writin

Author's Response: thank you for your reply its helpful

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Review #3, by Gryffindor_Girl__X

Getting Over Grief

31st August 2007:

It's good.

A tad confussing with like the speaking cos like I'm not used to reading it like that.
But good. (:

But only Ginny can really return
cos like
Harry and the gang were in the 7th year when the battle happened (:

:]

Hope I helped.
Keep writing.
Great first chapter.
Check outmy first story if your like
xxx

Author's Response: thanks i'm working on my next

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Review #4, by fanficgal

Getting Over Grief

30th August 2007:

plez review

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