I was originally going to review a different story, but I sat staring at the summary of this one, seeing listed as characters: Hermione and Dobby and under ships: other. I thought to myself, Hermione/Dobby? Surely not. Naturally, after I had that thought, I simply HAD to read this story to find out who the "other" was.
What I like about this story is that a narrator who is quite separate from the characters tells the story (I'm sure there's a name for this that I once knew, but I've forgotten it). I see this technique occasionally but not very often. It isn't suitable for every story, of course, but it worked very well here!
I really enjoyed the slightly "crazy" statements that gave this story so much personality. For example: Hermione being out too late for curfew but too early for being an early-bird; Hermione being a "scientist," the day-glo orange unmentionable, Dobby thinking of giving socks! Haha!Author's Response: This story was a random one. :] I'm glad you liked it. :]
I think the technique it's called "estranged narrator" or something like that. :] Report Review
This was so sweet, I love Dobby/Winky stories.Author's Response: Thank you. :] Report Review
...LOL. Otty. ILU. So hard. ♥Author's Response: ME LOVES DIDI. VERY MUCH.
"TANTISSIMO." ;] Report Review
Ha! funny, funny. Wish there was more "house-elf porn" lolAuthor's Response: Haha. Me too. -wink- Report Review
I absolutely love this fic! Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks. :] Report Review
oh this is excellent u so need to write moreAuthor's Response: Thank you and I don't know. Maybe. :] Report Review
Okay this has got to be the most random, psychotic fic I have ever read...and yet I love it!!! I mean, Dobby drying himself & Winky with an ORANGE THONG? It's hilarious. =D
TN1~Author's Response: I consider psychotic a compliment. Haha. Thank you. :]
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