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Review #1, by Alopex Flowers and Chocolates

30th October 2009:

I was originally going to review a different story, but I sat staring at the summary of this one, seeing listed as characters: Hermione and Dobby and under ships: other. I thought to myself, Hermione/Dobby? Surely not. Naturally, after I had that thought, I simply HAD to read this story to find out who the "other" was.

What I like about this story is that a narrator who is quite separate from the characters tells the story (I'm sure there's a name for this that I once knew, but I've forgotten it). I see this technique occasionally but not very often. It isn't suitable for every story, of course, but it worked very well here!

I really enjoyed the slightly "crazy" statements that gave this story so much personality. For example: Hermione being out too late for curfew but too early for being an early-bird; Hermione being a "scientist," the day-glo orange unmentionable, Dobby thinking of giving socks! Haha!

Author's Response: This story was a random one. :] I'm glad you liked it. :]

I think the technique it's called "estranged narrator" or something like that. :]

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Review #2, by Luna Longbottom Flowers and Chocolates

12th February 2008:
This was so sweet, I love Dobby/Winky stories.

Author's Response: Thank you. :]

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Review #3, by didi__ Flowers and Chocolates

18th October 2007:
...LOL. Otty. ILU. So hard. ♥

Author's Response: ME LOVES DIDI. VERY MUCH.


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Review #4, by R_Loves_H Flowers and Chocolates

16th September 2007:
Ha! funny, funny. Wish there was more "house-elf porn" lol

Author's Response: Haha. Me too. -wink-

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Review #5, by Enchantlize Flowers and Chocolates

1st September 2007:
I absolutely love this fic! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks. :]

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Review #6, by kyrandia Flowers and Chocolates

30th August 2007:
oh this is excellent u so need to write more

Author's Response: Thank you and I don't know. Maybe. :]

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Review #7, by The_Nameless_One Flowers and Chocolates

29th August 2007:
Okay this has got to be the most random, psychotic fic I have ever read...and yet I love it!!! I mean, Dobby drying himself & Winky with an ORANGE THONG? It's hilarious. =D

Author's Response: I consider psychotic a compliment. Haha. Thank you. :]

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