I like your story so far i read it twice and i was wondering when you were going to update

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I love it ! okay , i have my 1st chapter posted on hpff now . and well can you read it ? and well review it and tell me how you like it and stuff , because i love your righting and mine isn't as good as yours . trust me . so it's call * the silver locket * by KatyBlack . Thank YOu . please read it . and review . now about your story , it's awesome i love it . Margret Butter , ha where did you get that name ? i like it alot , i mean i'm just wondreing .

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cool story i really like it and now it's one of my favs .

Author's Response: Aww, well, thank you, Katy.

I hope you stick around till the end. I WILL finish this.

B. Lupin xoxoxo

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I am intrigued by this "Margery Butter". I need more details, Author-Lady!! I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Haha. Margery Butter won't re-appear for a little while, but when she does...BAM!

It's comming, once I write it. Promise.

Mrs B Lupin xxxoxo

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ok that was good! but greg suddenly leaving had me wondering. is he an imposter???!!! i know, judging by my last review, i sound like i think everyone is slurping down polyjuice potion and replacing others, but really, that was pretty odd in context... and i want to know more 'bout margery butter!

great job! u really have me wondering what's gonna happen next! aargh! the suspense is killing me!!

anywho, 10/10!
xoxo~lolo
p.s. i was wondering if u could review one of the stories my friend lex and i have written, and give us some advice! :D

Author's Response: Greg is very sneaky, suddenly springing into the story like that. How rude. There is an imposter, but I'm not going to say if it is Greg, Pomfrey or Margery. It may not be either.

B. Lupin xoxoxo

P.S. Which story, or all of them?

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i adore it! Belle reminds me of me, which is sort of scary in a funny way...i rarelly make sense, and i can't spell well either;)

Author's Response: There's is a little bit of Belle in everybody. I'm glad you can relate to her. :)

(I can't spell either!)

B Lupin xoxoxoox

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ok last time i reviewed, which was like, two hours ago (i took a break from reading), i didn't put down everything i thought about this fic, so here goes (beware, this may be long...)

-i love the name belladonna! its so pretty, and u can make so many nicknames with it!
-bella seems to be a little strange for a sixteen year old girl. don't get me wrong i love her for it, but talking to her stomach? weird... its ok though, i like weird.
-when u said that madame pomfrey looked skinnier, were u planting the seed that she wasn't really madame pomfrey, but a polyjuice imposter? or was she just skinny?
-when grandma dot gasped, did someone stun her, and the person that gave bella the pink box was the same polyjuice imposter?
-why is she losing sarah as a best friend? i must have missed the part where sarah was horribly mean to bella?

so those are the questions flitting in and out of my mind right now...

i laughed so hard in every chapter! u are a comical genius! so funny!

please update really soon! i love it so much!!
20/10! :) xoxo~lolo

Author's Response: :) I think I love you :P

- Yes, I wanted soemthing with LOTS of nicknames (not just for the confusion).
- Yes, remember the strangeness, massive plot leak right here.
- Hmm..clever...I'll have to keep an eye on you.
-The Sarah story will unfold a little more shortly.

Hehe. All in due time, darling.

:) Mrs B Lupin
xoxox

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! foxy moron! that's a good one! u wouldn't believe how hard i laughed at that!!! lolz!! ur great at writing humour, i can tell!!! can't wait to keep reading-- 10/10!!

xoxo~lolo

Author's Response: Foxy-Moron was a very highly entertaining personal experience of mine. :P I'm glad you found it funny.

Take care!

Beck
xoxo

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HURRY! I want to know what happens!!!

Author's Response: Whee! Okay, okay, I'm hurrying! Should only be a short while until my chapter is validated.

Hope to see a few more reviews soon!

Mrs B. Lupin
xoxo

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lily should stop being weird

Author's Response: Shut up Mil

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i hate crab :P

sucked in again to Bella

Author's Response: Shut up Mil

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the spacing is slightly cookoo, but otherwise a good chapter

keep writing

Author's Response: Shut up Mil

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i wear my sunglasses at night! thats the song that this chapter reminds me of!

Author's Response: Lol, but Shut up Mil

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awkward! i'd hate to be a debutant

xxooxxoo

Author's Response: Shut up Mil

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sucked in to Bella!

:) :) :)

hahahahahahahahahahaha!

Author's Response: Shut up Mil

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Wow! Great long chapters, intrigueing (is that how you spell it???) plot and dantastic chapters, you certainly have me addicted!
Please Update soon! Is she going to fall in love with Remus or Sirius and also a bit confused is she really sick or is she just a wierd little girl!

Author's Response: :P I have NO IDEA how to spell it. That's why I love SpellCheck so much. I'm glad you are addicted. My one big fan was getting lonely.

All in good time, my lovely. All in good time.

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxox

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niiicce. that definatley woke me up!

Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxox

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ooh, a good story for fun reading! I like it :)) can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks for the review!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxoxox

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amazing story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxoxox

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omg!!! she want crab darn it!!! why doesnt anyone understand? haha... LOVE IT! you finally updated**does happy dance**

Author's Response: Why don't they just give her crab, dammit!

Yes, I finally updated. I'll send a new chapter in for validation shortly.

*does slightly weird happy dance*

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxo

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HAHAHA they think she's insane! this is hilarious... i'm not sure if it's supposed to be but it is. you should update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, it is suppossed to be funny. But it will have some meaning too, so don't forget that.

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxox

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That was SO funny!

Author's Response: :P Why thank you!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxox

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update soon

Author's Response: I will, my lovely.

Thanks for the review!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxoxox

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update soon

Author's Response: I will! Promise!

Thanks for the review!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxoxox

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aww cute... silly madame giving the wrong potion! sooo you brought in the marauders! yay! this is awsome by the way... keep going with it will you?

Author's Response: She's a silly one, that girl. Lots more of the Marauders coming up!

I'm continuing, don't you worry!

Thanks for the review!

Love always,
Mrs Becky Lupin
xoxoxoxoxox

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