This is good! I love the movie Yours., Mine, And Ours! I
This story and that movie are soo funny lol

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I'm sorry. I count 12 kids total. Even if that's wrong, there are definitely more than 8... Can you clarify this?

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Thankyou, I enjoyied this fusion comedy by the way did you know that the Quaid/Russo version of Yours, Mine and Ours was a remake? The 1968 version starred Henry Fonda and Lucille Ball.

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lol! When I was first reading this, I had a inkling that it was based off of Yours, Mine, and Ours. Love it!!!

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Well I must say you have an great writing style =)

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Wow this is a really funny story! A little rushed, but it was still good. And in the las chapter who's point of view was the story told?

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This is a brilliant story and I really liked it. I have two complaints and thats it.
1) It seemed a little short and rushed. Great plot. Maybe a little bit more details
2)... i had one but I can't remember it. I don't know. Brilliant story. OH! I remember it. I think you should have had the kid's info stuff at the beginning with pictures beside appropriate child.
It was good. Needed a little work but all together a delightful story. I enjoyed it.

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I liked the end of this chapter the best. "Step four, fix our idiocy" I love that!

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haha that is evil. If I saw a snake on the ground in my house I would be completely freaked!!! oh sorry. got chillls from that thought lol

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I have a few suggestions. like, organize it a little more. because at times it gets a little confusing. Thats all.
Excelent story though.

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not too much details but it was still good. I like it.
Oh. By the way. I'm changing my name thingy to Gynnyhearts so...yah... just to let you know.

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I got a little confused but I like it. Very god.

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This is good. I really like this story.
I'm mad at myself though because I haven't had much time to read that much so I'm far behind.

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I loved it! That was great! Keep writing stories! :7)

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I hope that they can get them back together! I'm so sad that Hermione left but she did handle it for a long time. I loved it! :7)

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Yeah! They're still together! :7) I loved it! Those are some bad kids though! :7)

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I loved it! Having all those kids who hate each other must be hard! :7)

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I really liked it but it was a bit confusing. Did they leave for a long time or just one night? :7)

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Ah well! It was still really good! :7)

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AHH! I really liked it! I don't know how anyone could not like it! :7)

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I loved it! Wow! That's a TON of kids! :7)

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I really liked it even though not much happened. You just have to get to know everyone. :7)

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So there is magic in this...

Harry is still alive but will not marry Hermione...

What does Draco for a living?

Does Draco have a nanny?

Is Dark a boy or a girl? Can you put a chapter picture of her?

10/10

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What an interesting start...

10/10

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I can't believe its over! I didn't quite imagine the ending like that. Its a good idea but maybe you could revise it later. Great job with this story!

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