{reviewid: 2589067, reviewer: 'OZ123'}
13th September 2011:
This story is cute and fun to read
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{reviewid: 2464984, reviewer: 'Lily'}
15th January 2011:
OMG! I love this story! This is like the third or fourth time that I'm reading this :D It's so cute!
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{reviewid: 2463225, reviewer: 'presario-x1000'}
11th January 2011:
Hey:)
I was just wondering what program you use to make your banners?
P.S Great story :)
10/10
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{reviewid: 2409970, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
I found it to be successfully suspensful, irritating, and entertaining. If I had to yell at my computer screen one more time to make Lily Evans do the right thing, I was going to blow my brain stem to pieces, and then I'd be dead because my heart wouldn't remember to pump and my lungs would forget to take in air. So it's a good thing she finally figured it out.
I thought this was extremely enjoyable. I laughed. I got really mad. I wanted to kill some people. I thought Kelly was seriously annoying. And I had a great time reading it.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409965, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Yay! Yay! Yay!
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409961, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
I enjoy the suspense. It's fun.
I would absolutely loathe it if I had read this story as work-in-progress. But completed, I really love suspense.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409958, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Bah, who cares about Russell anyhow? He can marry someone else and not die with Lily. Leave that romantic tradegy for James.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409956, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Yeah, there it was. 'Course it was James, Lily. They both dressed like Zorro so the author could get away with that.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409954, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
After my first review, where I said it would have to be James, I started thinking about maybe it could be Peter. So it's nice that he got to be involved so wonderfully.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409952, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Okay, Mr. Right options. Remus. James. Sirius. Peter. Russell. Some character I haven't been introduced to. Daniel.
I wonder who it'll be. Glad I don't have to wait until you post it to find out!
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409947, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Yeah, don't get your hopes up too far. And don't get too disappointed. Just you wait; James'll be along any time now.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409944, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Cute.
But some big-time trouble is about to go down.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409942, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
"This will all end in tears."
Yes it will. And James with Lily.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409940, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
I didn't anticipate Lily completely changing herself and lying to get Russell. That seems...odd to me, out of character. I agree with James; what happened to Lily?
I think it's ridiculous to change yourself for someone simply because you want to be with them. I think it's ridiculous James did it for Lily (even though I write James/Lily and I do find it adorable; hypocritical moment over and out) and I think it's ridiuclous Lily'll do it for Russell. But that's just a personal belief.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409929, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
I didn't anticipate Lily completely changing herself and lying to get Russell. That seems...odd to me, out of character. I agree with James; what happened to Lily?
I think it's ridiculous to change yourself for someone simply because you want to be with them. I think it's ridiculous James did it for Lily (even though I write James/Lily and I do find it adorable; hypocritical moment over and out) and I think it's ridiuclous Lily'll do it for Russell. But that's just a personal belief.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409922, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Uh-oh!
Lily's letter, James' nickname for her, her owl. Why do I get the feeling something awful is going to happen...
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409918, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
If anything, Lily could blame tripping down the hill on James. Because he yelled to her while she was running over it.
I forgot to say Bravo last chapter. So here it is, twofold.
Bravo to you.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409917, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
...What happened? I'm not sure I know...
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{reviewid: 2409914, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
Of course she's going to use Potter's advice to get Mr. Rite! That's what the whole story's about. Silly Lily Evans.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409909, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
I wonder what'll happen; it seems likely to be very interesting.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2409905, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
7th September 2010:
James'll be Mr. Right! I know it, I know it, I know it!
I don't, actually. I just have a very strong hunch.
I'm extremely excited to read this story.
Bravo to you.
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{reviewid: 2339414, reviewer: 'Breanna'}
27th April 2010:
Just one word:
Awww.
10/10 (213/10 if I could :~D)
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{reviewid: 2299355, reviewer: '0sweety10'}
15th February 2010:
Physical pain? lol yea i think i agree with lily. I would probably be too scared to play quiddich.haha great chapter!
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{reviewid: 2299349, reviewer: '0sweety10'}
15th February 2010:
Pink hair! i love the humour in this story.lol oh gosh that sure was loads of work!(:
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{reviewid: 2289050, reviewer: 'LOLhaily'}
24th January 2010:
omg i guessed it was peter!! hahaha
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